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message 1: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Martin wrote: "snow brighter than the day moon between the caribou "

two thumbs up!


message 2: by Robbie (new)

Robbie Bashore | 122 comments Martin wrote: "the night air fills the loon's call"

two thumbs up, again.

Okay, I like them all!


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Martin Gottlieb wrote: "the old man and toddler sway between steps"

This I like enough to steal.

The old man and tot
swagger along together -
cute as buttons.


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