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Critique Partners and Swaps > I have a full YA Sci-Fi, 85k. What do you have?

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message 1: by Jearl (new)

Jearl Rugh (goodreadscomjearl_rugh) | 15 comments I'm willing to swap. Here's my pitch, what's yours?

When fifteen-year-old Zoe bounces tonight, she’s after her first kiss. The lure of Kirk and the football team’s beach party withers, though, when unfamiliar men appear in her driveway and, concealed, she spies them mystically abduct her family. While they hunt her, she’s blindsided with the most unlikely but inescapable truth. She’s a freak, a hybrid—half human, half ET—shape-shifter.

This new reality not only contorts her worldview, it erupts with questions over her own conception and, more important, besieges her every hope of a normal future with Kirk. With her pursuers drawing near, however, she knows she can’t just do nothing. Yet, the one thing she needs more than a hint of where her family has been taken—courage—is as obscure as her prospects of success. Now, her heart and mind ravaged by dread and self-doubt, she faces a destiny from which she may never return.

Contact me at jearl@jearlrugh.com or through GR.

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message 2: by Brooke (new)

Brooke | 63 comments That sounds like an interesting concept! I would be willing to swap if you're interested. Here is mine (YA adventure/urban fantasy, 60k):

Nanda can feel the emotions of animals, and no amount of parkour or capoeira training can make her forget it. When she wakes up with the past three days wiped from her memory, a mysterious tiger mark on her shoulder, she's shocked to find her weak parkour skills gone. This is the new Nanda, and she can leap over rooftops like an urban ninja.

Determined to finally save the animals who call to her, she teams up with her overprotective training partner Tiago and obsessive teen blogger Eric to take down an animal trafficking empire in Los Angeles. All while unraveling the mystery of who unlocked her strange powers -- and why.

I also sent you an email. Let me know if you think we'd be a good fit!


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