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Gavin
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Mar 25, 2017 12:26PM
So, is the Very Last Song gonna be a poem?
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Oh, then, I think it would be better if you separated some of the sentences with a period or a semicolon? Sometimes, if the two sentences don't fit, and they're only separated by a comma, the transition can get kinda awkward and confusing.
:)OH, yeah, I recently read a book, and it was really helpful for writing. It's also really short, so I recommend you read it if you can.
It's called The Elements of Style, by William Strunk Jr..
I love it it's so beautiful and poetic! How long is it going to be?
