Critique needed for first three chapters of MG fantasy

[JaDean]

Critique needed for first three chapters of MG Fantasy. Willing to reciprocate.

Blurb:


Brought together to fulfill ancient prophecies which will deliver their cultures from the destructive forces of darkness, Juniper and his sister Lupine of the blue-eyed Snake Clan, and Muya and her brother Tawa of the brown-eyed Bear Clan are chased through the mysterious desert of the American Southwest. If they are to survive and defeat their common enemy, a Skinwalker using forbidden knowledge to control the plants, animals, and geology of the land, the two sometimes opposing clans have to learn to trust each other and to share their own secret use of forbidden knowledge.
Meeting a memorable array of Legend People, mystical creatures, and helpful animals, the four learn to combine ancient technologies and knowledge with their individual strengths and skills. Will they learn to work together to discover the meaning of the prophesy and destroy the Skinwalker before it is too late?

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Thank you!