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onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Um a few


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Maybe one without insta love

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I have more


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments The year is 3024 and the world is rule by a new species called the Perfects. The Perfects are and alien/human hybrid. Each perfect has a special ability and talent that use. Humans are extinct. Or that's what they think. Humans have to hide because they can't fit in with the Perfects. Most humans are barley living.

Each Perfect is driected if they find a human they have to bring to the Dome where they would be transformed. One day the bad boy popular Perfect went stumble across a human girl on the run for life. He takes her to the Dome. The human girl gets transformed. Little did he know about the corrupt ways of the government until he is made to take care of the girl until she adjusts to her new life.

The government secerts he finds out.
She's confused and has no memory on what happened but she is a danger to the public with her ablitlies that no one has.
Can they stop the government before it's to late?


I did this one a lot but love it.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments I have more though if you want to here it


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments You know of the story of Red Riding Hood. Wrong. Little Red Riding Hood has goes to grandmas house. Like the normal story. The big bad wolf turns out to be a werewolf who tries killing them. The axe man is a werewolf hunter in disguise. He kills the werewolf. He must of not a done a good job. Some years later.The werewolf is the new student at a high school. Red Riding Hood is now this a regular girl in school. She isn't cool,but has two best friends. They do everything together. She thinks the new kid is a stuck up jerk. He is,but he is drawn to Red. He doesn't know why. He forgot the scent of the little girl. They fall in love and he tells her what he is. She doesn't believe,but she does. She ran away from him because he tired killing her. Sometime later she excepts it. She wants to be turned to live with him forever. The hunter comes back ready finish the job he started.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments All anyone wants is to be normal. Double goes for Girl A. She wants to fit in. That will never happen. She is a vampire. She stays keeps it low at school. Correction she is a Vampire Princess. She is being forced to marry another vampire who she doesn't even know. Guy A is the new kid at school. He is a jock. He fits right in with everybody else. Except he made one mistake. He decide to sit at the lunch table make friends with Girl A. She doesn't trust him at all. Then she realizes she likes him. He likes hurt. One day on a hiking trip a vampire hunter shoots and misses hitting him. She fights with herself to change him. She didn't want to lose him. Now he is a vampire. What she did was forbidden. Now they have to keep it a secret. With hunters and rules. Will they be able to stay together.

Requirements
I would love to be the girl.
Semi detail
Plot twists


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments I like the red riding hood. May I be the boy?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Ok and yeah


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Sure :)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Sorry mines not super detail I have a great idea but shes complicated but shes basically little red riding hood

Here it is
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Name: Tessa
Age:17
Appearance: http://www.wallsforpc.com/wallpaper/l...


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Name: Alex Joseph Randal
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Appearance:
Human form: He is 5'0, jet black hair

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Wolf form:




https://www.google.com/search?q=White...

History: He was turned into a wolf by a witch after he rejected her daughter. Wolf by day, human by night.
Family: His Father past and never liked talking about it.
Mother is still alive
Younger sister (10) (Ellie)
Middle sister(13) (Lilly)
Eldest Sister (15) (Margret)


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments So shall we start?


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments Sure
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Another day of school. She had two best friends. She was surprise that she had any. Ever since the day she was attack by a wolf. People called her a freak. She ignore their rude and mean comments. She got up and picked out a black pair of jeans and a neon green tank top. She picked up her white cover top on over it. She put her charmed necklace that had a broken heart that said best on it. She put on some flip flops and ran out the door to catch the bus. She hoped her dad will get her car fixed.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex Joseph Randal pushed his skateboard along the sidewalk as he rode to school. He sighed as he came closer to the new school. New year, new kids and more of everything. Why did I have to move here? He stared at the ground as he was not looking where he was going.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Jack Frost (Jaquelyn, Jackie)) The empress of winter The lonly white wolf wrote: "Alex Joseph Randal pushed his skateboard along the sidewalk as he rode to school. He sighed as he came closer to the new school. New year, new kids and more of everything. Why did I have to move he..."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments ((Sorry))

She looked up around. She was called a freak every single day because of what happened. She hated being picked on because she was attacked by a wolf. She didn't like dogs. She liked cats only. She was a very timid person.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex skidded to a stop when he was at the main doors of the high school. He picked up his skateboard and took off his helmet before walking in. He then walked to his locker to put them away.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She walked very slowly to her locker. She was nervous. Her hood was up like usual. She took another breath as she walked in her class and sit in the back of the class. She sat in the corner.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex had finished putting everything in his locker. He started to wonder who this new girl was going to be. Sighing, he walked into the room and sat down in the back as well.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She was tired still. She kept her mouth shut and her head down. She looked down. She was upset some. She didn't like school. She had to talk to people.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex looked up and leaned back. He may be a new kid, but he had too many habits like this one which annoyed all of his teachers. Which also led to a lot of detentions.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked up at him scared. "Hi." She whispered. Then looked right back down.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex almost fell out of his seat, "Hi." He answered back at her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head and looked down even more. She messed up something. She sighed.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex was about get up and introduce himself to the girl, but three girl approached. Everytime the girl giggled and tried to talk to him, he would just glance over at the girl in the corner.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She sighed some more. The cool girls looked at her and laughed. She slugged further into her seat.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex looked up at the girls and excused himself from their circle. He walked over to where she sat. "I am Alex and I am new here." He held out his hands for the girl to shake, "I was wondering if you could show me around the school." The gears in his head started to wonder if he knew her from a long time ago. Or at least someone who looks like the girl he knew.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked up and started to connect the dots. He was one of them. They probably set her up. She looked down and nodded her head again but she didn't say a word nor did she shake his hand. She didn't want to be paid attention to. She was just a stupid girl who was a freak.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments "Excuse me, I would like to know your name if you do not mind. And like I said, I am new to this town. I moved here two days ago." He tried to smile, but failed slightly.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She nodded her head slowly not looking up from her desk. She wasn't going to say anything to him. He was one of them. "That's freak there," said most of the people in the room.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments "No, I meant your real name. I like to know someone's real name. And you are not a freak." He pointed out, "You are a beautiful the way you are and I can tell that your personality is extraordinary as well."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She didn't answer him. She wasn't speaking to him or anyone else. "We all told you her real name and it's Freak." They said laughing. She didn't mind she was used to this.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex did not laugh as he simply turned towards the crowd in the other corner; he gave them a glare. "You know, that she is not a liar, so knock it off." He growled slightly and then turned back to the girl, "Please tell me your name miss."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She looked down further hoping he would go away. She didn't want to speak. "Yeah that's her name." Said another student. "Freak doesn't fit her bit freakazoid does." The whole class was laughing. She on the other hand was looking down further.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex sighed and then grabbed the girl's wrist and pulled her up to her feet and then out into the hall. He pushed her against the wall, "I want to know what your real name is. Not what your classmates call you!" He demanded her.


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She gulped some. She was honestly scared of him now. She shook her head no. She looked down trying not to cry. She was shaking though she tried getting free. She wasn't going to answer one them that's who he was.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments "If you want to know my name, it is Alex Randle." He told her, "And you are going to tell me before the day is over."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments She shook her head no. She wasn't going to speak. She just wanted him to let her go.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex growled at her as his eyes glowed slightly, "All I am asking is a name and that is it. I do not want you to tell me your name is freak because I know it is not your name."


onceuponatimeareview | 8405 comments When she heard the growl. She started to panic. She hated dogs. She hated them so much. She was deathly scared of them. She wasn't going to answer. Her eyes were pleading him to let her go.


Jack Frost, Jaquelyn, Jackie:  {The empress of winter; The lonely white wolf } (elchornoboy) | 7572 comments Alex shrugged, "Fine, I will let go." His arm fell to his side as his eyes came back to normal and he stopped growling. He walked back into the classroom and sat down.


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