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message 1: by Alexis (new)

Alexis | 861 comments Hi Alex. Ohh, sounds good. Personally, I'd add a question mark to the second paragraph: As the investigation continues, the evidence against Wild mounts, but is prejudice against the newcomer affecting the judgment of Sergeant Mitchell? Constable Turner thinks so; she is determined to bring the killer to justice, no matter who it is, or what she has to do.


message 2: by R.L. (new)

R.L. Jackson (authorrljackson) | 856 comments Mod
Love it Alex!!! Did you create a tweet for it already so I can RT it? Post it in the things to tweet folder too so more people can spread it around as well.


message 3: by R.L. (new)

R.L. Jackson (authorrljackson) | 856 comments Mod
Well as for the disclaimer the murdering of women is a given that there is violence happening to them. I don't think it's needed and if some e complains they should've have picked it up based on the blurb alone. Don't censor yourself too much


message 4: by Alexis (new)

Alexis | 861 comments Alex wrote: "Alexis wrote: "Hi Alex. Ohh, sounds good. Personally, I'd add a question mark to the second paragraph: As the investigation continues, the evidence against Wild mounts, but is prejudice against the..."

I think you should add the disclaimer. It doesn't spoil anything and I'm sure your readers will appreciate the heads-up!


message 5: by Carole (new)

Carole P. Roman | 4665 comments Mod
Brit should get to it tomorrow.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Done! Great cover!
I'm actually reading a book with the exact same title. Lol.
Yours also sounds very interesting, one that I would actually read!


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol. Well if you are looking for someone to review it (even though I'm a slow reader), let me know!



message 8: by Kay (new)

Kay | 414 comments Alex wrote: "R.L. wrote: "Love it Alex!!! Did you create a tweet for it already so I can RT it? Post it in the things to tweet folder too so more people can spread it around as well."

Tweet being knocked up ....."


Tweeted :)


message 9: by Kay (last edited Feb 24, 2017 04:16AM) (new)

Kay | 414 comments Then I shall tweet that one too!


message 10: by Kay (new)

Kay | 414 comments Haha, I'm happy to do it whenever, but I need the nudge or I will forget! I'm terrible at social media.


message 11: by R.L. (new)

R.L. Jackson (authorrljackson) | 856 comments Mod
Tweeted!


message 12: by Kay (new)

Kay | 414 comments Tweeted :D


message 13: by Ember-Raine (new)

Ember-Raine Winters (ember-raine_winters) | 186 comments I just RTed Kay's tweet cuz I'm on my phone and it's a pain to copy stuff from here lol


message 14: by Amy (new)

Amy Hamilton | 2560 comments RTed it


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