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message 701: by ash (new)

ash hahah I know right!? I'm like.. no mom this is what i love to do and it would be nice to have this one thing to myself.


message 702: by cαяяιє (new)

cαяяιє | 125 comments Haha, that's funny xD My mom has a goodreads but she never goes on it and I don't think she even understands how it works


message 703: by ash (new)

ash LMAO!


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) I tell my mom its a place were i get to right my own book. Its true but i don't tell her about rping.


「 kozue 」 ··ᴘʀᴇss ᴘʟᴀʏ·· (marquessofthefangirls) | 467 comments Lol same. Whenever I pull up goodreads on the bus my friend asks about it. I always tell her, "oh.. It's a website where I keep track of my books.."


message 706: by ash (new)

ash Fayza wrote: "I tell my mom its a place were i get to right my own book. Its true but i don't tell her about rping."

SAME!


message 707: by ash (new)

ash She just thinks that I'm writing my own book and other people are helping me.


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) I say people read it and they ask who but i tell them i don't know. Random people.


message 709: by cαяяιє (new)

cαяяιє | 125 comments I just told my mom it's a place where people review books, which is true, I just left out the rping part


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) Lol i think most of us lets out the rping out. What if they found out?


「 kozue 」 ··ᴘʀᴇss ᴘʟᴀʏ·· (marquessofthefangirls) | 467 comments I dunno. I hide if from most my friends and family (even though some already know). My friends will just find it boring and wonder why I'm so interested in it.


message 712: by ash (new)

ash My best friend use to love GR now she hates it and thinks im weird for still going on it >.<


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) Omg!
Thats what my friends say except one. I tell my friends just not my parents.


「 kozue 」 ··ᴘʀᴇss ᴘʟᴀʏ·· (marquessofthefangirls) | 467 comments I shared my RPing secrets with my friend. She's almost addicted as I am! Thank god. But now I'm unsure about showing everyone else


message 715: by cαяяιє (new)

cαяяιє | 125 comments Yeah, only my best friend knows about me rping and stuff, and she doesn't really care. My other friends don't really know, they just know I like to write stuff, which is true, I guess


「 kozue 」 ··ᴘʀᴇss ᴘʟᴀʏ·· (marquessofthefangirls) | 467 comments It's weird because we make references to goodreads at school and everyone's like, What r u even talking about?? And who r u talking to?


message 719: by ash (new)

ash what really!?


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) Really dont you think your old enough to do what u want


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) I wouldn't be able to do that. It will drive me crazy.


(̲̅K̲̅)(̲̅a̲̅)(̲̅i̲̅)(̲̅t̲̅)(̲̅e̲̅)(̲̅l̲̅)(̲̅y̲̅)(̲̅n̲̅)(̲̅n̲̅) | 574 comments Oh goodness I just dyed my hair purple, blue and teal its so cool


message 725: by cαяяιє (new)

cαяяιє | 125 comments ƘẴɨȚēĽƴǸƝ wrote: "Oh goodness I just dyed my hair purple, blue and teal its so cool"

Oh my gosh that sounds awesome


(̲̅K̲̅)(̲̅a̲̅)(̲̅i̲̅)(̲̅t̲̅)(̲̅e̲̅)(̲̅l̲̅)(̲̅y̲̅)(̲̅n̲̅)(̲̅n̲̅) | 574 comments It really in its purple on top blue in the middle and teal underneath


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) Don't tell me like this cuz i have been using this girl for my recently cyz that would be finny.


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message 728: by dany (new)

dany (elothwen) Guys I need some help. I have a plot for a book I'm going to write and I need feedback; I also need a title for it.


message 729: by Hanna[h] (new)

Hanna[h] Cumberbatch (andthetheyburiedmemummble) | 506 comments I can help! What is it about?(:


message 730: by dany (new)

dany (elothwen) Well here's the plot I wrote. I'm trusting you guys not to take anything :I
It's fantasy and adventure mostly.

(view spoiler)


message 731: by cαяяιє (new)

cαяяιє | 125 comments ℓιℓу wrote: "Well here's the plot I wrote. I'm trusting you guys not to take anything :I
It's fantasy and adventure mostly.

A girl. A wand. And no memory.

A young woman by the name of Elvira wakes up one nigh..."


Wow, that's really really good!! I'm super intrigued already!


message 732: by dany (new)

dany (elothwen) Thank you!


message 733: by Hanna[h] (new)

Hanna[h] Cumberbatch (andthetheyburiedmemummble) | 506 comments Very entertaining! And don't worry, ask anyone I hate plagiarizing with a passion because I think it's so low for a writer(who shouldn't even be called one) not to mention that I love reading fantasy but don't think I could ever write one(:

Okay, one question though, who is the woman who died from the cloaked figure? Is she the owner of the house? Because I'm assuming that this is the back of the novel book, where the readers get an insight. If so, maybe you can mention that the owner of the house was female? Just a suggestion (: if this is a rough draft, then it's still a really good one!

And as for titles, it usually changes throughout the story as you write it, but here are some ideas:

•Elvira
•Arivle (it's her name backwards, but maybe you can make it into some sort of code or magical word? Idk haha)
•sticks and stones may break bones but wands will never hurt the (i know kinda long)
•The way to Retrogression
•The Cloaked Past



It's kind of hard when just given that little information, so I would just say that in the end you might find a word or a small key or statement or something that goes perfectly with the plot of the novel. Sometimes it won't even make sense in the beginning of the story until you run across that word or situation in the novel, ya know?

Does this make any sense? Hope it helps!


message 734: by dany (new)

dany (elothwen) It is a rough draft, I just wrote it down quickly before I went to sleep so I could remember my exact idea.
Thank you for all the feedback, though! I really like the last two titles, but as you said, it changes while you write it. I was planning on putting this on Wattpad, however, so it probably needs a title beforehand. I can always change it, though.
I am a bit confused by your last paragraph. Do you mean like a buzzword?


message 735: by Hanna[h] (new)

Hanna[h] Cumberbatch (andthetheyburiedmemummble) | 506 comments No problem! Always happy to help out a fellow writer!

And what I meant by that was like... For example, the movie Hocus Pocus! I'm sure the writer never write the title until it was nearly complete. Many of the characters through out the movie say "hocus Pocus" in multiple sentences. And because that stands out a bit in the movie, that's where the title came from. Makes sense?


message 736: by dany (new)

dany (elothwen) Yes! I think mine might be "cloaked", because that relates to many things, but we'll just have to see.


message 737: by Hanna[h] (new)

Hanna[h] Cumberbatch (andthetheyburiedmemummble) | 506 comments Cool! Let me know how it goes! I wish ya luck!


message 740: by Bailee (new)

Bailee | 3 comments Hey my names Bailee a friend of Kaitelynns


message 742: by Jaidyn (new)

Jaidyn | 35 comments Can anyone catch me up on everything that happened in the last week? :// I'm still in school and just got out of finals week.


message 743: by Bailee (new)

Bailee | 3 comments thanks :)


message 745: by Jaidyn (new)

Jaidyn | 35 comments Why the -.-?


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) –_____–


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) I call it the whale face. Or my friends last name is Noman and we call it after her face so we say "Nomans face"


message 749: by Bailee (new)

Bailee | 3 comments hey im new 2 goodreads any advice to make people


ƒαуzα...{Iɱ Ꮗҽíཞᗪ} (lovefayfay) When you rp with people check how they write and do the same.


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