Tessa is trying to find her brother. She doesn't know what to expect, but after roughly three years with no clue what's going on, she decides it's about time to find out what the hell he's been doing and how he managed to get himself into trouble. Soon enough, she realizes that by trying to help him, she's unwittingly gotten herself into some deep, deep shit. Looking for general feedback. If there are any big grammar errors or whatnot please let me know. I'm aiming to get my manuscript to the point where I can start looking for agents, if that helps at all.
Looking for general feedback. If there are any big grammar errors or whatnot please let me know. I'm aiming to get my manuscript to the point where I can start looking for agents, if that helps at all.