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message 1: by William Tyler (new)

William Tyler Davis (billytwrites) | 3 comments Looking for some help with my 2nd draft rewrite of 60k word NaNoWriMo manuscript. I plan on posting it serially here on goodreads but will provide Google docs access to anyone interested as well.


message 2: by William Tyler (last edited Feb 06, 2017 11:06AM) (new)

William Tyler Davis (billytwrites) | 3 comments No bites so far... Here's a brief overview:

AoD is life. That is, Architects of Dreams, the massive multiplayer online role-playing game, is life.

For Wes, who thought moving to college would be simple and exciting, it is everything but. Forced to live with his ex-best-friend Nick, the sting of Nick’s betrayal only a walk to the kitchen away, Wes finds solace alone in his room gaming.

When the campus housing manager calls and offers him a room in the dorms, it could mean cutting his ties with Nick completely. If only Nick would stop beating his dreams on AoD each night.

Could his lab partner Riley be the key to moving on, starting fresh? Or maybe the quirky girl on the floor above him who doesn’t seem to understand boundaries.

Fangirl meets Ready Player One in Architects of Dreams (the title will change).

message 3: by Martin (last edited Feb 07, 2017 10:18AM) (new)

Martin | 13 comments Hey, i will read yours if you will read the first two acts or all three of mine. It is about 66k words(105k total) and i'm trying to get feedback. It's a fantasy novel, pm me for details if interested.

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