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Hunter (Totally NOT a communist ☭)
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Jul 03, 2017 01:35PM
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Well Miles really creeps me out for starters, but I know he's supposed to lol. Mara's and Vanessa's attitudes get on my nerves. Uhhhhh...I feel like I'm missing one but those are the ones I can think of right off the bat.
Ohh haha I love Miles, so I don't care. I didn't really expect Mara or Vanessa to have anyone really like them, but I also didn't expect anyone to like William lol
I liek her! i think " as the world they lived in had heavy Japanese influence." is unnecessary but that's just my opinion.
WHen she's ready for posting can i look through it again to make sure things make sense for Mitzuki's character?If Hitomi will be dead she'll likely never be happy again, so gotta make sure she's miserable :p
Lol Hunter :P I'm about to post her in the students: female profiles if you want to look at her then?
Well hey: the person she cares about most in the world is gone, so logically she'd be depressed for a long time, if not the rest of her life *sHrugs*HOnestly no because if the parts with mItzuki change they might need to look over it again and i don't want to burden them with that :p
Okay first i think you should add more than a few years after Mitzuki leaving her daughter being born because when she left she was...fifteen?ANd maybe change the stories of her time at the school to like a journal she read? I imagine she'd want to be alone most of the time so she wouldn;t sit down and tell crazy stories. Or maybe her dad sneaks her the journal?
This is just my thoughts, of course. I, again, don't think she could ever be *truly* happy with her brother dead, you know? mAybe at times but once whatever is going on ceases, she sinks right back into despair.
I'll still use the pic but I'll describe her a bit better. I'll add those, thanks for the suggestions!
Fair enoughThanks. I know it's your character and all but since her mom is my character i should havbe some input, you know? :p
THough once you mentioned her again i wanted to bring her back...that's not going to happen though :(
I don't know, maybe after a while and Yumiko is settled in her mother announces she's coming back to be a botany teacher or something? She doesn't have to arrive right away.
Elizabeth♛ Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛ wrote: "I don't know, maybe after a while and Yumiko is settled in her mother announces she's coming back to be a botany teacher or something? She doesn't have to arrive right away."SHe probably wouldn't want to leave the house much...let alone go to one of the last places she was with her brother. :\
It was just a suggestion dude.
Elizabeth♛ Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛ wrote: "P.S. I updated her profile."Nice! i'm sorry i you didn't want to change that >.<
Elizabeth♛ Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛ wrote: "It was just a suggestion dude. Although Hannah is extremely miserable yet somehow seems to hold down a job just fine "
We ended up not doing anything for 4th of July, but it seemed like nobody else in our neighborhood did either. There weren't very many fireworks as compared to last year.
We have a longstanding tradition we didn't do this year. Instead we went to a different relative's house and it was no different from a normal family gathering. SO i forgot for a while it was even Independence Day
I just had stuff to do this week and if I get extremely sick like I did in February to the point where I can't even get out of bed I'll be super behind on stuff.
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