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Hunter (Totally NOT a communist ☭)
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Jul 03, 2017 01:35PM

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Well Miles really creeps me out for starters, but I know he's supposed to lol. Mara's and Vanessa's attitudes get on my nerves. Uhhhhh...I feel like I'm missing one but those are the ones I can think of right off the bat.



If Hitomi will be dead she'll likely never be happy again, so gotta make sure she's miserable :p

I'm about to post her in the students: female profiles if you want to look at her then?

HOnestly no because if the parts with mItzuki change they might need to look over it again and i don't want to burden them with that :p

ANd maybe change the stories of her time at the school to like a journal she read? I imagine she'd want to be alone most of the time so she wouldn;t sit down and tell crazy stories. Or maybe her dad sneaks her the journal?
This is just my thoughts, of course. I, again, don't think she could ever be *truly* happy with her brother dead, you know? mAybe at times but once whatever is going on ceases, she sinks right back into despair.

I'll add those, thanks for the suggestions!

Thanks. I know it's your character and all but since her mom is my character i should havbe some input, you know? :p



SHe probably wouldn't want to leave the house much...let alone go to one of the last places she was with her brother. :\


Nice! i'm sorry i you didn't want to change that >.<

Although Hannah is extremely miserable yet somehow seems to hold down a job just fine "



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