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From what I can tell, it's Illinois, Indiana, and Ohio. Though maybe it should be called 'Corn Trio' or something other than belt. Since I thought 'belt' was supposed to imply more than two or three states with similar traits?

Now I hope he keeps his promise when I actually get the game lol I can't wait to see who his favourite characters are!


It's not for what you probably think it's for, lol



I have no idea. Normally I see the type of girl you're describing a an antagonist who the cast is at odds with. She normally either becomes humiliated and runs off, defeated or gives up her wicked ways and becomes a protagonist :P
Uhhh...maybe some sort of dining place where the waitstaff legit act like servants to royalty and the power goes to her head? I dunno...I know there's a place where the waitstaff is rude/sarcastic to you ((it's all a show though)) so that could be a thing




I....I'm going to take a shower now. A long one. I think I've earned it.

Oh I know what it is. I'm just surprised is all
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Great job!

I really hope the person likes it! It wasn't easy to write, haha


You did a great job.
^That was the guy's response after he read it haha

....Mom's will be, by far, one of the hardest things I'll ever have to write.

She went on to say she never had any intention of reading anything I wrote because she actually dislikes reading fanfics; the fanfics I wrote were going to be for the fandoms to enjoy that I wrote them for.
Of course I got really upset and said she was the only person who's ever requested I write something for; I vastly prefer doing requests for people than writing my own stuff because at least then one person is happy instead of everyone being upset which is usually what happens when people read my fics, She then told me life isn't fair and that I can't have everything I want; if life was fair I would be a super popular and highly-requested fanfic author and she would be an extremely famous comic writer but that's not how life works.
She also told me the reason why people don't request anything from me is because I harass and barrage them about their request like I did with her and nobody wants to be around that, and she wouldn't listen when I told her literally nobody has ever requested anything from me aside from her, and she said I just lost the only person I would ever get requests from. She said I should just focus on writing fanfics that make me happy instead of writing for other people and to not throw a hissy fit when things don't go my way. She told me she doesn't want that fic at all anymore and if I write it anyway I'll get in huge trouble with her. She said I ruined it for myself because I made a huge deal out of something she was just doing for fun and something she thought I would find fun too.
I'm still incredibly upset. Her fanfic was going to be the next one I worked on, and now my writing schedule is completely screwed-up because now I have nothing to work on now. I'm not inspired to work on anything else I have planned.

When I watch an anime I know you like mayhaps i can make a request?


Now back to work for me. Shame you only cone on when I'm working :p oh well


At first my mom joked that I was having a bad reaction to all of the lactose, but she started to think something was wrong when I threw up several times in an hour. I was really sweaty and couldn't stop shaking/trembling. I was in a lot of pain but Mom was convinced I just had a stomach virus. I was really thirsty but had no motivation to drink water because I felt I would just throw it up again. I eventually went to sleep at some point in the night. As I was about to fall asleep I noticed Mom had gone into my room to check up on me and for some reason I found that gesture sweet, as earlier she said nothing severely wrong was happening to me.
I woke up on Sunday really worn-out and thirsty. My stomach still hurt a little bit. I'm still not exactly sure what happened, but at least it's over.

And really, anything. I like romances ((though not really into yaoi)), slice of life, fantasy, sci fi, adventure, action, mystery...

Uhhh...Sailor Moon, Bleach, Hetalia, Black Butler, Assassination Classroom, The Devil is a Part-Timer, Seraph of the End, I really like the game versions of Diabolik Lovers and Code;Realize but I don't know very much about their animes....Rosario+Vampire and Highschool DxD, the latter is really really good but your parents won't let you watch it....the first season of Danganronpa is an abridged version of the game so if you want to know what the characters are like you can watch that....hmmmm...I'm trying to think of some other ones but right now those are the only ones coming to my mind as ones I've actually legit enjoyed a whole bunch.
Right now my mom and I are finishing up Code Geass and she won't shut up about recommending it to you so you can watch that if you want. It's a futuristic action anime.

I thought Code Geass was super inappropriate too?

And as for how faithful the first season is, well....it does follow the plot of the first game, it's just abridged. My problem with it is the fact that they sacrifice a lot of character development in the process, and I mean a lot of character development. The characters are all pretty one-note. I know it was a dating simulator originally and they can't put in all of the routes, but they still could've put in a little something, you know what I mean? Plus a lot of the dialogue in the routes are foreshadowing for later events in the game.
Basically, if you just wanna know the first game's plot and the appearances and basic characteristics of the characters, then the anime would be good. At the very least you'll finally learn who Celestia and Chihiro are and isn't that all that REALLY matters? Lol
I mean, it's not as inappropriate as some other stuff she's suggested. From what I can remember there have been like two scenes of naked breasts but that's it. Honestly it's an action anime.
And forget about my mom, she forgets you're not allowed to see naked bodies even though you're an adult.

It doesn't help that the girl, despite being my favourite character from the series has a pretty hard personality to write, especially because she never really interacts with other guys aside from the main character whom she's annoyed by. I just feel like the writing in this is super....blah.
They're just going on a date together because their leader is making them go, but right now they're just going shopping for video games and....blah. All of this is just....blah.

Gotcha. Still wont risk it but when I move out i will definitely watch erotic anime :p



I can already see how this is going to go. I'm going to need some advice on how to make it better, on how to write it better, but I'm not going to get any advice, so I'm just going to do whatever I want, end up hating the fanfic with a burning passion, and then never thinking about it ever again after it's published. That happened to my last few fics. And it doesn't help that I'm one of the only people in this fandom who ships this, so that's already a huge strike against it right there.



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