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Elizabeth ♛Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛
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May 14, 2017 05:28PM
Ohhhhh...this is from you? You're snugglesthefluffykitten?
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It's Snugglesthefluffykitten. Get it right. Gosh :p
That's disappointing...I got really excited and genuinely thought it was a fan of the series who told me that and liked all the references I put in.
Oh...I'm sorry I disappointed you...I just thought "Since she hasn't had any reviews yet, why not give one myself?"
I get reviews, I just didn't have any for that fanfic yet and I wanted them. My favorite reviews are like the ones you gave me-when people say they love what I do the series' story, or that I'm the first person who wrote a story like that or wrote about that character.
So...you still liked it?
Yeah your review was fine, I was just hoping it was from someone else.
Oh...Well now that you know my account, you're free to look at my profile and abomina...errr....stories
I did look :P
They sound fine :P Sound like stuff I would write, actually :P
Well you write a lot of fluffy stuff that's not so serious, it's just the characters having fun, and I like to write stuff like that. Until I realize it's stupid and never do it again of course.
Yeah lots of them are like that...and then they turn out OOC if I use existing characters. OCs are just...bad.
Characters usually aren't a problem for me, it's usually the actual stories themselves.
What do you mean?
I just don't think the plots and ideas I have for fanfics are very good.
AhMy plots and ideas are way too complex.
I just write the fanfic I want to see in the fandom that hasn't been written, or it has been written, then I write it the way I want it to be written. Sometimes people like my ideas, but most of the time I don't get any recognition. One of the fanfics I'm most proud of got lots of praise, and I'm happy that everyone else liked it since I had a lot of fun with that fanfic since I loved the idea behind it.
Ah.What was that fic about?
It was a Bleach fanfic, and basically in the series, a Soul Reaper's first Reaping is a huge deal for them since it's the first time they get to go to the human world. I wanted to write about the first Reaping of one of my favorite characters, since the series goes into her past as a younger Soul Reaper quite a bit but never mentions her first Reaping. But I didn't want her first Reaping to be some random insignificant Soul she'd never see again, I wanted it to be one of the other Soul Reapers to give more weight to said story.
At the same time, I wanted to tell an origin story of Momo and Toshiro since I love those two and wondered what their human lives were like. And then it hit me-why not combine the two stories?!
Because the woman I'm writing about, Toshiro is her Captain. It's stated several times she's been in the Soul Society longer than he has, so I knew I'd hit a great idea.
In my story, Toshiro has recently died and the Soul Reaper performs her first Reaping on him, assuming he's some insignificant Soul she'll never see again despite how powerful he is in controlling the snow around them. She agrees to let him visit the grave of his childhood sweetheart, Momo, who died because of his carelessness, and afterwards, he gets Reaped, and the Soul Reaper thinks she'll never see him again.
But I love the ending, when Toshiro and Momo meet each other again in the Soul Society, and despite having no memories of each other prior, they take a liking to each other and agree to always protect each other.
You know now that I think about it I write a LOT about death lol
Elizabeth♛ Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛ wrote: "It was a Bleach fanfic, and basically in the series, a Soul Reaper's first Reaping is a huge deal for them since it's the first time they get to go to the human world. I wanted to write about the f..."Awesome!
Meanwhile my Pokemon/Star Wars story has teenage Imperials hunting a young Jedi. They shoot her down over the Pokemon world and "befriend" Ash and company ((despite the Sith literally choking Ash)) and now the Sith is on a quest to collect gym badges, and battle the elite 4 thinking that will somehow prove his personal strength all while hunting ancient relics of a supposedly extinct species who once occupied the planet and may or may not have created PokemonLike I said, confusing. IDK why the two Non-Sith are even in the story. They're like a platypus-they don't do much.
I had so much fun writing it! I'd give you the link, but I'd prefer if you actually familiarize yourself with Bleach first :P
But everyone in the comments kept telling me things like how creative the idea was and how they had never read a fanfic with that idea before.
Yeaah that would probably help...I plan to *possibly* rewrite that story and you don't have to understand the STar Wars lore to read it. i mena...they kind of have to explain it themselves, you know? :p
Hunter (Totally NOT a communist ☭) wrote: "Meanwhile my Pokemon/Star Wars story has teenage Imperials hunting a young Jedi. They shoot her down over the Pokemon world and "befriend" Ash and company ((despite the Sith literally choking Ash))..."GASP! You take that back! Platypuses are my most favorite animal!! :P
Elizabeth♛ Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛ wrote: "But everyone in the comments kept telling me things like how creative the idea was and how they had never read a fanfic with that idea before."That's great!!
Elizabeth♛ Smart Girls Love Trashy Books♛ wrote: "Hunter (Totally NOT a communist ☭) wrote: "Meanwhile my Pokemon/Star Wars story has teenage Imperials hunting a young Jedi. They shoot her down over the Pokemon world and "befriend" Ash and company..."Are they really? :p
They are actually :P Have you not seen them? They're adorable! And constantly defy nature :P
Of course I've seen a platypus. Outside of Phineas and Ferb too :pI know the males have venom that hurts like something fierce. There was someone ((former soldier I think?)) who was exposed to platypus venom and he said he'd much rather be shot than deal with their venom.
It's enough to kill a person yeah :P Ugh stupid Mom won't get off the phone so I can't go to the store. I need something and only she knows where it is, but if she's on the phone then she can't get it, and now it's too dark outside to go.
She's going to cook me something but I know with my stupid fast metabolism I'll just be hungry again in like thirty minutes especially since I haven't eaten anything all day.
Why haven't you eaten anything all day?!
Why haven't you eaten anything all day?!
Nothing to eat that I know how to make myself.
Not even sandwich stuff? Or snacks?
Nope. You can think the hollow pits of stomachs my brothers have.
Thanks a lot, hollow pits of stomachs Elizabeth's brothers have
Please don't be like this, I'm really grouchy right now, Mom said she'd be off the phone literally an hour ago and she's still on it and my baby brother is watching TV at literally the highest volume available.
Sorry....
Finally Mom got off the phone. She's yelling at my brothers right now lol.
I guess I'm still a bit annoyed that your review on my fanfic is probably all I'm going to get on that story and while I like you, I don't really think your comment should count since I want actual feedback from actual fans of the games, and at first I thought that's what I got, and that that person genuinely enjoyed my origin story and had fun finding all the Easter Eggs I put in. Now I just feel stupid for thinking anyone would enjoy that.
Now I feel awful....I should have just said something here where you knew it was me...instead I got your hopes up...Though I think you need to give it more time. My Pokemon/Star Wars story didn't get a review until almost a MONTH after publication.
You shouldn't feel bad about making me feel better, I should feel bad that I thought someone genuinely liked my fanfic.
How do you know that? It was uploaded earlier today. I've had stories go days ((and again, almost a month)) without a single review.And I genuinely liked it...
Someone followed the story. I assure you that was NOT me!
Yeah, I already knew that, but I don't really count follows as anything. Plus I looked at their profile and it never said anything about them being in that fandom.
I don't know what to tell you if you don't count those :\Not everyone adds every fandom of theirs to their profile, nor does everyone write. I can give you a 100000000000% guarantee that I'm in fandoms I don't have listed in my profile that I have also never written for.
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