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Escape from Palmar (Dagmarth #1)
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message 1: by Joseph (new)

Joseph (josephjmiccolis) This is the beginning of a new hope for Dagmarth, a planet facing its last chance to win the war for freedom and peace. It’s the beginning of a new journey for all who know the new prophecy. A boy named Kodus Solaris Hemsley with the potential to save Dagmarth, or defeat it. Kodus will be taken as a baby far away to Earth to be hidden. Years later, an isolated life will encourage teenage rebellion that leads Kodus to an inevitable escape from home. And when Kodus discovers his true reality, he will learn of the ongoing war and the prophecy that foretells his destiny.

Will Kodus accept his role in the war, or now rebel against his true identity?

https://www.amazon.com/Dagmarth-Escap...


message 2: by Carol (new)

Carol Tietsworth | 31 comments Are you looking for an editor?


message 3: by Joseph (last edited Dec 29, 2016 11:32AM) (new)

Joseph (josephjmiccolis) I am open to feedback on the story as I do welcome honest reviews and any criticism sent to me via email. I posted this message to see whether others would feel inclined to purchase the book based on the cover, blurb, and reading sample which I have updated.


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