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message 1: by Jess (new)

Jess | 3721 comments As I've been reading more and more from the PNR and UF genre, I notice I have to take breaks because sometimes books begin to sound very similar.

Anyone notice some themes, storylines, and/or characters that have become overdone or overused?


Nichole (DirrtyH) (dirtyh) Self-loathing half-breeds!


message 3: by Kathy (new)

Kathy  (hnybee411) The woman that has remained pure or has only had horrible sex before she meets her magic mate to whom she will forever be tied whether she likes it or not yet oddly, she seems to be okay with being stuck forever with a man she just met. Of course, the sex is sensational so that helps.

that also makes it alot more fun to read, but that's beside the point


message 4: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Ms. Too Stubborn To Live.

She and the self-loathing half breed are often the same person!

She frequently mistakes a nasty, bitchy and rude attitude for strength.


★Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ Sheba Tong Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ★ (shebatong) I get sick of reading about military men. The hero is always a former military man or assistant of some sort.



message 6: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments I think the market is completely saturated with tortured warriors.
Yet, I find all of them so incredibly hot, I can't possibly bemoan the overuse!


message 7: by Kelley Anne (new)

Kelley Anne | 1619 comments lol, Michelle, you just make me laugh!


message 8: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments :)


message 9: by Literary Ames (last edited Jul 30, 2009 09:48AM) (new)

Literary Ames (amyorames) | 237 comments Zeroes to heroes, omegas to alphas, outcastes to leaders.


message 10: by Liz (new)

Liz (arcanepenguin) | 77 comments In UF a theme that seems to be getting overdone is the "reluctant hero." The hero is just doing what he/she thinks is right and seems to save the world in the process.


message 11: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments The female/vampire/werewolf love triangle


message 12: by K (new)

K | 51 comments Michelle M. wrote: "I think the market is completely saturated with tortured warriors.
Yet, I find all of them so incredibly hot, I can't possibly bemoan the overuse! "


OMG!!! :) I completely agree, I am such a sucker for that (but it is a frequent theme).





message 13: by new_user (new)

new_user Love triangles. Also, what Michelle said about emotionally unavailable heroines (as if it's more attractive in a woman? Da hell? LOL).


 Danielle The Book Huntress  (gatadelafuente) I cannot stand emotionally unavailable heroines. If you don't want a hero who's in love with you, send him my way!


message 15: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments I'll take a couple of those ignored heroes myself!

I don't mind a love triangle if it lasts a book or two--it can be exciting! But if it drags on past that, it loses realism. Pick already, damn it!


message 16: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments DORIAN DORIAN! .... Oh. Sorry. lmao


message 17: by Shannon (new)

Shannon (Savhage Temptrest) (savhagetemptress) | 85 comments Kathy wrote: "The woman that has remained pure or has only had horrible sex before she meets her magic mate to whom she will forever be tied whether she likes it or not yet oddly, she seems to be okay with being stuck forever with a man she just met. Of course, the sex is sensational so that helps.

that also makes it alot more fun to read, but that's beside the point"


LOL! I completely agree!



message 18: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Amelia you KNOW that's exactly who I was thinking of. ;)


message 19: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments lol of course. :D

I want more Dorian right now!


message 20: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments nom nom nom


message 21: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments "nom nom nom" ....... LMAO XD


message 22: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Tee hee!

It is so common that the triangle includes one of each species, just to keep both the vamp-lovers and the shifter-lovers happy.

Oh, another common theme is the lingering ex. Doesn't anyone ever just break up and never see each other again? Sookie and Bill, Bill and Lorena, Kiyo and Maiwen, Ash and Artie, Vayl and ex-wife, Anita and Richard, LC and Christine, Alcide and Debbie, Garnet and Parrish, Sebastian and Tereza...those are the ones off the top of my head.


message 23: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments I tend to STRONGLY DISLIKE the lingering ex.

It's a rare occasion when I actually pity or like one of these.


message 24: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Frost did an okay job with...oh, I can't think of her name. Wealthy woman who knew Bones when he was still human. She was spiteful, but she's morphed a bit. That one didn't turn out too bad.

And in the book I just read, I liked the ex better. But that's because he's a whips and chains bad boy. The present boyfriend is overwhelmingly safe.

On the whole, the lingering ex feels forced and frustrating.

Oh, thought of another: Mercy and Samuel. DAMN there are a lot of them hanging around...

HEY, what's up with all the heroines being strongly het, but they all have a gay best friend? In Terri Garey's books and in Patricia Briggs', the friends actually have relationships that are featured, so it's a good addition. But in other books, it's like: "insert token gay man here."


message 25: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Yes! I knew it was an "A" name. Thanks!


message 26: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments Lmao the "token gay man". It's sooo true though!

I got all excited for a second and thought you meant Kimberly Frost! Then I realized it was another Frost. :( (you should swap something on your challenge list for Would-Be Witch!

It has a lingering ex but ... it's technically not an ex? lol It's hilarious!


message 27: by Starling (new)

Starling | 176 comments Samuel doesn't count as a lingering ex. Basically he is still in the running until the end of the most recent book.


message 28: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments I think he does. Their relationship was ages ago and he was pursuing her far more than it being a mutual thing. But I see how you'd put him in a different category than the usual lingering ex.


message 29: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments "Heck, try living in a small town with one you hear about constantly."

No, thank you! Even in a place the size of New York I'm still fallin' over them!


message 30: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments LMAO Michelle how many of these lingering ex's do you have?


message 31: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Hmn. Right now, 2 I see with semi-frequency. But that's my own fault, so I shouldn't complain. Others, well it doesn't matter how big NY is--if you hang out in the same neighborhood, you're bound to see each other eventually!


message 32: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments True. Imagine going to the same college and having them in your friend circles.

Though I've perfected my avoidance techniques(ducking into alcoves, high tailing it in opposite directions, pretending to be engrossed in conversaton with other people). So there are rarely the akward chatty occasions with them. lol


message 33: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Lol

I'm imagining you skulking around campus like a lil secret agent.


message 34: by Starling (new)

Starling | 176 comments Amelia, I was born in NYC. You wouldn't believe how small town some of the neighborhoods are. I lived in the Bronx and I knew people who had never been to downtown Manhattan.

Things are more mixed up now because in the 50s and 60s the young couples could not find housing in the Old Neighborhoods and moved out and away. And then the Bronx basically blew up in the middle 60s and still hasn't recovered.

Not quite Detroit, but closer than most people think. I haven't seen the apartment building I grew up in since the late 60s. It was in an area that burned, so it might not even be there.

But the neighborhoods that did hang together are very small town.


message 35: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments I grew up in the Bronx! Mosholu Parkway in the hizzy.

What area did you grow up in, Starling?

And it's so true. Every 10 blocks is its own little world.


message 36: by Starling (new)

Starling | 176 comments I lived on Featherbed Lane. It was an old street outside of the grid system that was put in Manhattan and the Bronx during the War of 1812. Featherbed Lane was the street Washington took when he was leaving New York and heading to New Jersey.

There are two Washington Bridges. The older one that goes from the Bronx to Manhattan was built during the Civil War at the ford Washington crossed. The other side of that bridge is Washington Heights. The Bronx side is University Heights (more or less).

The Northeastern states use the State - County - Township - Village system. In New York City, they leave out the Township part and the Boroughs are the Counties. But the Villages are still there in the old district names.

I also lived in West Farms (in the Bronx) and Flushing (in Queens).


message 37: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments Oh I am! I have my own super secret spy music and everything.

I whisper it of coarse, as not to attract avoided persons' attentions.


message 38: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Super spy music. LOL!! Is it Pink Panther-esque.

:)

Starling, my friend lives in West Farms or on the edge of it now. I lived in Norwood originally, and went to Bx Science and Fordham for school. I looked up Featherbed and realized I do know where it is when I saw a pic of the nearby steps!

Ah, New York. I need to go to Arthur Ave soon for some yummies!


message 39: by Starling (new)

Starling | 176 comments Featherbed Lane is weird. When they put in the grid they broke it up, so even though I lived in that neighborhood for about 24 years (was out of it for a short while) I NEVER saw the house numbers below about 62 and only found the part that ends up at what was probably George Washington's ford across to Manhattan when I was married.


message 40: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments Pffffft! No Pink Panther music here! More like 007.


message 41: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Of course, Amelia!

::snicker::

Starling, I came to the conclusion long ago that the Bronx is weird overall!

As an overdone theme, have we mentioned first person POV in general? It seems like every UF is first person!


message 42: by Amelia (new)

Amelia | 1011 comments I've noticed that too!


message 43: by Schnaucl (new)

Schnaucl | 14 comments Michelle M. wrote: "I don't mind a love triangle if it lasts a book or two--it can be exciting! But if it drags on past that, it loses realism. Pick already, damn ..."

Could not agree more. After about book two I don't give a damn if they will or won't I just want a choice so we can all move our lives.




message 44: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments And I've started to associate first book syndrome with first person. Now I expect better of the author if it's in third.

Schnaucl, seriously. It stops being spicy and starts getting stagnant.


message 45: by Kelley Anne (new)

Kelley Anne | 1619 comments As for the first person, that really has never bothered me. But maybe that's because at least half of the books that I read I listen to on audio, and those just seem to work out really well with first person.

*Spoilers for Prey, Blood Promise, and Dead and Gone
As for the love triangle, in my opinion, it kinda depends on the way that things are handled. In the case of the Stray series by Rachel Vincent, the love triangle was around for the first 3 books, but it was only a very small side story. Never really something that would truly break up the main characters. Then, book #4 blew that wide open and it's going to have to be a main point of the next book. In that case, I have no problem with how it's been handled. But on the other hand, I am SICK and TIRED of the love triangle in the Sookie Stackhouse series! Bill just needs to go away! She's picked Eric, it's just pathetic that he wont leave! And the one that really bugs me is the love triangle in the Vampire Academy series. When Adrian got brought into the mix, I thought that it was great! But now the overall situation is bugging me. Technically, Dimitri shouldn't even be in the running anymore, but yet, Adrian just can't catch a break! One thing though that I've noticed about myself is that I tend to go for the underdog! Like Jace and Adrian!


message 46: by Schnaucl (new)

Schnaucl | 14 comments Michelle M. wrote: "And I've started to associate first book syndrome with first person. Now I expect better of the author if it's in third."

I think it's a genre convention though. Or maybe a female author one. I almost never notice male authors using first person in urban fantasy and I almost never notice female authors not using first person.

I used to have that same reaction though. I automatically thought third person was a better quality of writing. I do agree that it's something almost all first time authors use. Speaking of, just thought of a man who does use first person (Mark Del Franco) and I think the Conner Grey series are his first published novels. I haven't read the first book in his other series so I don't know if he continues to use first or not.




message 47: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments Simon R. Green uses first person, too.

Some authors use first person brilliantly. They create a smooth intro to the characters and universe.

Others get trapped in having their narrator putting the action aside to lecture you on the set up of their world and it can get a bit exhausting.

I think it's just far easier to make the "Universe" lecture enthralling in third person, so I now cut any first book in a UF series some slack and have come to expect tedium as they explain how things work.


message 48: by new_user (new)

new_user LOL, Michelle. I don't cut them any slack when it comes to that. An author with even a little experience learns quickly how to present information without intruding on the narrative at least, if not with subtlety. If I see an author do that more than once, I'll usually stop reading.

First person actually requires an intense amount of talent to pull off since it requires much more familiarity with your narrator's character, finesse, and psychology. Which is why I think new authors automatically leaping to first person are basically shooting themselves in the foot.


message 49: by The Flooze (new)

The Flooze (the_flooze) | 1831 comments So spot on, new_user! When I say I cut them slack, I only really mean the first 60 pages or so. I'm not all THAT generous!

It's also a mistake for editors to not push for more polishing before they send it to print.

That said, if I didn't cut UF authors a little slack, I'd miss out on some great series!


message 50: by new_user (new)

new_user LOL. 60 sounds about right.

Yeah, I agree. Those editors can stand to push a little more. Although I can see it from their point of view too. It's not strictly their job to teach these writers, really, and there's a thin line between editing and control.


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