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Creating a good "hook" for a book
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Apart from the last point, it's a bit like writing a newspaper story. Start with the important news and add relevant background, or facts.
We don't need to read unnecessary clutter, too many names, trivial detail, loads of adjectives, description etc. But, it does depend on the style of book.


My novels tend to have 2-3 plot threads. In that case, I can write a quick first chapter, leave a question unanswered and move on to the second thread. I hope to get my readers pondering not only how things at the end of chapter 1 will conclude, but this new plot thread in chapter 2 will tie in with the first thread.
This makes sense to me, but I think I might be weird as a reader. Cause a lot of books with good hooks seem to throw a LOT of information all at once to create intrigue. But when I get bombarded with a lot of info in the first paragraph, I mentally crawl into a fetal position as I try to remember all the things going on at once (names, settings, what's going on?, etc.)
I tend to prefer stories that start simple and draw you in slowly. Example A character is doing something but we're not sure why.
Admittedly, this kind of thing works best when a book is highly recommended or the reader already has an incentive to read it. But I find that's just what works for me. And that's the kind of opening I want to write. Am I crazy?