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Well, he is a ninja. Maybe we can't see his real post! Tricky!
Edit: Okay, you fixed it, but I still maintain that there is a secret ninja post here somewhere, but I'm not going anywhere near Amanda and that katana.
Amanda wrote: "I don't have a black light, can I borrow yours, CB?"
Okay, but it is a glowing katana. Are you proficient?
Okay, but it is a glowing katana. Are you proficient?

Okay, but it is a glowing katana. Are you proficient?"
I need an explanation of what a katana is first. haha
A katana is a curved sword that a samurai uses. They are sharp on only one edge, but the best ones use folded steel to make that edge exquisitely sharp.
That opening scene to Cinders had me from the moment I started reading. And Hontas twisted my imagination with brutality done right.


Yes, omg, open a write and edit shop! If so, I'm reserving a spot at the front of the line. As a non English speaker sometimes I struggle so hard with a certain passage.. I would definitely make use of your services.
Tell me about this Samurai story you're working on. What traditional tale are you twisting this time?
V.M. wrote: "The next instalment of Good Tales for Bad Dreams will be based on Snow White and the Seven Dwarves!"
Brain: "Are you pondering what I'm pondering?"
Pinky: "Well, I think so Brain. But who would watch a movie called Snow White and the Seven Samurai?"
(Legitimate quote)
Brain: "Are you pondering what I'm pondering?"
Pinky: "Well, I think so Brain. But who would watch a movie called Snow White and the Seven Samurai?"
(Legitimate quote)
V.M. wrote: "+1 for Pinky & the Brain quote.
The answer is... well, I'm hoping people will be interesting in reading about it instead! "
That's amazing!
You can market it with that after.
The answer is... well, I'm hoping people will be interesting in reading about it instead! "
That's amazing!
You can market it with that after.
So glad you are back into writing gear. You are a survivor. You can do this.
I am pretty sure your gut is right. Since you said you lost your notes with your memory loss... it's best that you follow that gut anyway since it's the thing that will permit you to go on with the new stuff.
I am pretty sure your gut is right. Since you said you lost your notes with your memory loss... it's best that you follow that gut anyway since it's the thing that will permit you to go on with the new stuff.

V.M. wrote: "Happy to report that my latest WIP, a bloody tale of retribution and recovery, set in Feudal Japan... is finally back in gear.
Having taken time off for recovery, losing half of my notes in the me..."
I'm with GG there V.M. Trust your instincts. Let the hate flow through yo....err...wrong post there. I mean, trust in your inner voice to know where you need to go.
Having taken time off for recovery, losing half of my notes in the me..."
I'm with GG there V.M. Trust your instincts. Let the hate flow through yo....err...wrong post there. I mean, trust in your inner voice to know where you need to go.

V.M. wrote: "I've also started edits on the next Good Tales story *hint hint* it's set in Feudal Japan!"
Sweet!
Sweet!

Good luck on all your endeavors!
I say keep it. It's your heritage and there is no shame in it. People will always find something to dislike if they want to. If not the spelling it will be something else. Seriously, if someone doesn't know the difference between the two, maybe it's time they do.
By asking your editor to change the words for American spelling you risk missing some. No matter how great the editor is, errors are bound to happen. THEN readers might have a reason to complain.
I think it would be ok to add something at the start of the book if you feel it would help but I don't think it is something absolutely necessary. But that's just me. Maybe because I am a Canadian living in the USA, but geez, if I learned the difference, so can everyone. :P
By asking your editor to change the words for American spelling you risk missing some. No matter how great the editor is, errors are bound to happen. THEN readers might have a reason to complain.
I think it would be ok to add something at the start of the book if you feel it would help but I don't think it is something absolutely necessary. But that's just me. Maybe because I am a Canadian living in the USA, but geez, if I learned the difference, so can everyone. :P

Talk about a Writer's Worst Nightmare.... :#"
Crud! I hope you're able to retrieve it from your computer. Good luck. Hugs

V.M. wrote: "Soooo.... my novel had so many edits that it just crashed my Google Docs and now it won't open.
Talk about a Writer's Worst Nightmare.... :#"
Holy... shit... Wow. Sorry to hear this. Hope you can work it out, somehow.
Talk about a Writer's Worst Nightmare.... :#"
Holy... shit... Wow. Sorry to hear this. Hope you can work it out, somehow.


You wonderful person! My friend got two corgies, not really rescues but took them off people's hands, and trained them in agility. They were lovely dogs.

This means I have to sit on my hands until ..."
Word has it's own quirks. I overload it on 'typos' because I write fantasy and use made up words/odd names and it makes it choke sometimes. Glad you've got it figured out.
That's a lot of edits!

V.M. wrote: "I suppose I should get back to work on that other Good Tale I started pre-accident... "
A new good tale isn't a bad thing.
My wife's son has corgis and a half-wolf / half-husky. We went over the other day to play with them. They were all fantastic dogs.
The rat terrier that bit me, though.... not such a fun dog.
A new good tale isn't a bad thing.
My wife's son has corgis and a half-wolf / half-husky. We went over the other day to play with them. They were all fantastic dogs.
The rat terrier that bit me, though.... not such a fun dog.

So sorry for all you've gone through, but sure as hell am glad you're doing much better now! I pray for your comfort and healing.
Hugs, Sam
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Edited to update: I didn't know that about your hashtag! I'll go check it out!
PS your writing is brilliant. Can't wait to read more of your stuff!