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Hallie
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Nov 12, 2017 08:23AM
Except I was trying to go for interesting and emotional and blatantly failed. I think I was a bit too pedantic and about the details; I wanted to write about me rather than that character, and that was not what I was going for. I wanted Harriet's voice to be heard, but that's not quite what happened. That's why I think it's bad. And it's boring.
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I hope I get some major disease by tomorrow morning!!!!!!! Like um.... Pneumonia?
Alia [permanent semi-hiatus] wrote: "Oh and btw do you think I should enter the writing competition in Lorien's group? I'm debating.."Ohhhh you definitely should! I tried writing that story for the same competition, but I'm going with something else now. If you have enough time to spare, then I think you should! :) I'd love to read it!
Something like vomiting blood.... Uh or fainting.... Or I know, dying in my sleep!
Hallie wrote: "Except I was trying to go for interesting and emotional and blatantly failed. I think I was a bit too pedantic and about the details; I wanted to write about me rather than that character, and that..."Oh I see what you mean. Well it's not the end, you can always make it better if you want :) And it's still not crappy. In my opinion, most things aren't, they just have room for improvement. However, the song I sent you is something I would gladly label that way XD
Hallie wrote: "Alia [permanent semi-hiatus] wrote: "Oh and btw do you think I should enter the writing competition in Lorien's group? I'm debating.."Ohhhh you definitely should! I tried writing that story for t..."
Okay! Thank you for the encouragement. And ah I see lol. I'm concerned that the plot I have in mind is too extensive for a 7000 word story XD Idk if I will have time. But I will try. If it gets written, you might get a glimpse of two of your favorite roleplay characters (one of which isn't mine) XD
Hallie wrote: "Tele-tubbies????Oh good suggestion, Kavy! Although I'm dubious whether I'll like it....."
You'll love it trust me, it's really good
Hallie wrote: "13. Eye Colour: Brown18. Shoe Size: Depends on the brand.
27. Insecure: Oh don't get me started! Crowds, that, this....
32. Relationship Status: Single
49. Embarrassing Moment: Once my friend ..."
Lmao I went into the boys bathroom on accident, once when I was in 10th grade XD
Hallie wrote: "Pick Me A Number"
15, 16, 17, 21, 39
Hallie wrote: "Crappy Story Time!
"You're not supposed to be here!" A hand fell upon my shoulder, turning me around to face a mighty guard with a frown on his face. "Please head over to the fountain...."
it's amazing!!
Hallie wrote: "Stranger Things is good!"YES!
Alia [permanent semi-hiatus] wrote: "Hallie wrote: "Except I was trying to go for interesting and emotional and blatantly failed. I think I was a bit too pedantic and about the details; I wanted to write about me rather than that char..."I really don't know how to make it better.... Maybe I will, maybe I won't. Haha xD
Alia [permanent semi-hiatus] wrote: "Hallie wrote: "Alia [permanent semi-hiatus] wrote: "Oh and btw do you think I should enter the writing competition in Lorien's group? I'm debating.."Ohhhh you definitely should! I tried writing t..."
Yay! :D Oh wow now I'd give up my brother to read your story xD *makes a list of favourite characters and begins to speculate which one will star in Alia's story*
Gosh you were right, Kavy! It was really good! I finished season 1 yesterday, and mum was mad at me because I didn't study at all. Hehe that embarrassing moment seems rather common xD
15. Favourite Song: Ughhhhh!!!!!!! Way too many to list!
16. Favourite Animal: Um you know, I'm afraid of animals and uh..... I think rabbits are cute from far.
17. Favourite Colour: Purple!
21. Best time in my life: Two years ago, we had a class trip that was amazing! That was awesome! Then once H and I participated in a Science quiz and performed extremely well. We were the first to score maximum points and the youngest among all the teams too. We became famous thanks to that :D Besides, I was my usual self and ended up creating a rather funny scene there
39. Favourite Book: To Kill a Mockingbird
Ahana~ wrote: "I love Stranger things too!"The second season has 9 episodes, right?
Yep! I watched ep 5 of season 2 today!
I'll start season 2 today, if I can.
My English teacher isn't here, so the class won't shut up -_-
I didn't sleep until after 1 last night because I kept coughing continuously. I even threw up. Yet no one at home came to know...... They wouldn't realize if I was dead either.
My friend hasn't come today, and she won't pick up her phone. The friend she was fighting with is worried.
Well, so am I, but I have the feeling she is sick.
This isn't because of the cold. This cold contributes very little to my demeanour.
She texted back and called! Throat infection :(
No, I'm just going to let it kill me.
Help is here (trying their best to be here) what do you need?
Hallie wrote: "Gosh you were right, Kavy! It was really good! I finished season 1 yesterday, and mum was mad at me because I didn't study at all. Hehe that embarrassing moment seems rather common xD"
Ahana~ wrote: "I love Stranger things too!"
YES!
May͛a wrote: "Help is here (trying their best to be here) what do you need?"I'd like either of these two things: a cliff with no one around or a mental asylum.
❄️Ƙανу тнє Ƒαℓℓєη Aηgєℓ❄️ (Ɓνвαяму) (Aelonian) (AA family) wrote: "Hallie wrote: "Gosh you were right, Kavy! It was really good! I finished season 1 yesterday, and mum was mad at me because I didn't study at all. Hehe that embarrassing moment seems rather common..."
I've got to thank you for that! Um thank you! :D
"A nightingale in a golden cage
That's me locked inside reality's maze
Come someone make my heavy heart light
Come undone, bring me back to life
It all starts with a lullaby."
~ Escapist, Nightwish
A lot of people here are wearing dresses - two inches above their knee and all that, and then I walk in wearing in jeans, a t-shirt and a sweater. Say hello to Hallie!
I passed the Chemistry and Physics lab earlier, and some girls look like they wore only their lab coats.
"Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars
Yeah we'll be counting stars."
~ Counting Stars, One Republic
I am actually having a good day today!!!!!!
Hallie wrote: "I am actually having a good day today!!!!!!"Yay!!
Photograph
So about an hour ago, we were walking just heading to the front gate when my friends stopped near the park to take pictures. A couple of our classmates were also there. They came to me and asked me to take a picture of them. Like really singled me out: "Hallie! Could you take a picture of us please?"
Of course, since I love taking pictures of everyone and everything around except myself, I gladly took one of their phones. That's when I realised that two of them had invented a nickname for me. That was rather unexpected. I thought they never knew real name!
I took a couple so that they could just pick whichever they liked and handed back the phone and turned to my friends while they checked the photos. I could hear some pleasant exclamations (they did look extremely pretty!). But then while my friends were busy ignoring my existence, they screamed my name and that surprised me. I was afraid I messed up or something. What they said, however, was, "Hallie! Thank you so much! The pictures look so good!"
It was probably not even my skill that made the pictures look good, but it kind of made my already good day even better :) We had a good programme just before which I strongly enjoyed very much (one of the best I've seen!), and that compliment just made me happy. This probably makes little sense, but I love photography! And I captured some very bad pictures of the programme - one of the reasons being this cough that occurred uncontrollably. At least I did one good thing today :)
I should do more photography, though. I really love it!
that's amazing!! I'm so happy for you
Lillian wrote: "Hallie wrote: ""Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard
Said no more counting dollars
We'll be counting st..."
Oh my goodness! My bad! It is by One Republic! Sorry!
And regain conscious?Mays, I'm going to make that happen to Laura someday.
Why do I hate my right hand so much?
Yet another character to have their creators chuck obstacles towards them...poor girl. But hey, if Laura or you need anyone to talk to, please don't hesitate to tell us
I'm planning all the worst things that can come into my mind for her xD Alrighty!
Hallie wrote: "PhotographSo about an hour ago, we were walking just heading to the front gate when my friends stopped near the park to take pictures. A couple of our classmates were also there. They came to me ..."
That’s amazing Hallie! :D Btw, I’m sorry I haven’t been as active but it’s the same for me, if you ever need anything just tell us
Jingle ❀彡 wrote: "Hallie wrote: "PhotographSo about an hour ago, we were walking just heading to the front gate when my friends stopped near the park to take pictures. A couple of our classmates were also there. T..."
:D Thank you! Oh it's fine, Jingle! You deserve some peace, too!
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