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I'm Pukuls XD and I am 15 yrs old, wanting to write a fantasy/romance novel with something like teen angst hidden there:) I have only written the first 5000 words so far, but would LOVE it if it got critiqued:)
I don't have a blurb yet because I usually do that at the end of a book but here is an excerpt:
The night was cold as she moves into the depths of the darkness, her form changing- shifting into one of beauty. Golden hair ripples down her waist, her slender figure emphasised only by a thin black cloth barely covering her breasts, flowing onto the floor where her feet are adorned by thin delicate vines. Vines filled with thorns. Her full lips are painted a bright red colour whilst grey eyes are dusted with a black shadow. Pointed ears are hidden out of sight. She flits out her tongue coating her lips with a thin layer of saliva, as a devious smile appears on her flawless face.
If the human world has forgotten about the existence of the courts. She would show them exactly what they forgot.
Starting with tonight. The death of a human.
Please contact me at if interested:
boblinda26@gmail.com

I have a first draft of my YA romance which I am currently editing. it's about 69,000 words, but I promise you it's a fast read.
I think you'd like what I've written, a lot of your favorite books are my favorites too!
Here's a description of my novel:
June is a senior and a single child. She is also bad-boy Dean's girlfriend and their relationship is always a work in progress. When she meets Alex, June starts wondering whether her determination only is enough to turn Dean into a good guy, or is it even the right thing to do?
Let me know if you'd be willing to beta for me. I really really hope you do, because my character is also 18 years old and even though I haven't been 18 so long ago, I need a young heart to tell me if what she does is plausible.
Also, I love your hair. <3
Here's my e-mail address: roxo13lpsc@yahoo.com

Would love it if you would be willing to beta read our newest novel The Neuromorphs.
Here is a link to the book where you can read a chapter and decide if it is interesting to you.
http://dennismeredith.com/the-neuromo...
The authors blog post here http://wp.me/pjyFJ-vM
explains why beta readers and reviewers are so important and that we do listen!
You can reach me at editor@glyphus.com
Thanks for your consideration,
Joni
Dennis Meredith
I usually read YA books. Mostly fantasy, dystopian and romance or something that involves teenage struggles. I also love a great mystery or a novel that involves travel.
If you have a manuscript that contains any of those things I would be more than happy to read it and give you some feedback!
If you comment a discription of your novel below or send me a private message I'll let you know if I am interested!