A little blurb help is good for the soul :)

[Tara Woods Turner]

Hi guys, reaching out for more great feedback again. Would love for you to give my blurb a quick once-over. As always, thank you in advance for your help!

Beyond Chicken Nuggets: Easy, Sophisticated Meals For Children



Take your child's palate from bland to grand with Beyond Chicken Nuggets: Easy, Sophisticated Meals For Children. Meals can be so much more than basic - Lazy Crepes, Portobello Party Sliders and Onigiri Panda Bites are just a few examples of the delicious, fun foods that will delight even the pickiest little taste buds. Filled with beautiful and simple recipes, this cookbook will take your child's palate from bland to grand. The meals are specially designed to be uncomplicated, making it easy and fun for the entire family to participate!

[Marie Silk]

Wow, sounds great, Tara! And now I'm a little hungry :) The blurb sounds great as it is. If I were to change anything, it might be to drop the words at the end "to participate" to make it slightly more punchy.

[Tara Woods Turner]

Marie wrote: "Wow, sounds great, Tara! And now I'm a little hungry :) The blurb sounds great as it is. If I were to change anything, it might be to drop the words at the end "to participate" to make it slightly ..."

Agree - thanks :)

[Nik]

The dishes sound delicious! Attractive blurb.
I think turning 'palate from grand to bland' is a great punch line, but I'm not sure mentioning it twice isn't too much.
I'd change somehow this piece: " specially designed to be uncomplicated". Maybe a bit complicated for something uncomplicated or maybe a little dissonant with 'easy and fun' that come after. But maybe it's nothing and just my 'ear' -:)

[Tara Woods Turner]

*facepalm*
Originally I had planned to grand at the end of the blurb and decided I should start out with punch instead of ending with punch so I copied and paste it instead of cutting and pasted so that's why it's there twice. Idiot! Here is the corrected one.:


Take your child's palate from bland to grand with Beyond Chicken Nuggets: Easy, Sophisticated Meals For Children. Meals can be so much more than basic - Onigiri Bubble Bites, Lazy Crepes and Portobello Party Sliders are just a few examples of the fun fare that will delight even the pickiest tastebuds. These elegant yet simple meals are specially designed to be fuss-free making them easy and fun for the entire family!