Help with my tag line

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I could use some help with the tag line for my rom com Running From A Rock Star book. It's the first in my Brides on the Run series.

What does the poster child for responsible living do when she wakes up naked and spooning with the hottest hellion in rock-n-roll? She kicks him in the balls and runs like hell.

Thanks in advance for the advice.
Jami

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Jami wrote: "I could use some help with the tag line for my Running From A Rock Star book. It's the first in my Brides on the Run series.

What does the poster child for responsible living do when she wakes up ..."

I actually like what you wrote. Catching. It gives me an idea about the book and it seems like the kind of book I'd read.

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Rowena wrote: "Jami wrote: "I could use some help with the tag line for my Running From A Rock Star book. It's the first in my Brides on the Run series.

What does the poster child for responsible living do when ..."

Thanks, Rowena! I appreciate the feedback.

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Jami wrote: "Rowena wrote: "Jami wrote: "I could use some help with the tag line for my Running From A Rock Star book. It's the first in my Brides on the Run series.

What does the poster child for responsible ..."

You're welcome. And please, let me know when the book is published. It's something I'd like to read.

[Amanda]

I kinda really like it too, Jami! It's catchy and intrigues me.

*smiles*

[Annie, The Mistress]

Huh, I rarely ever say this but...

I'd not change a thing. Dead serious.

Dig it!!

[Tky]

Agreed!! It sounds fun! Color me intrigued! :D

[[deleted user]]

Thanks, ladies!

[Nicole]

I agree with everyone who's answered so far. I know that in another group, some people wanted you to "not answer the question" or remove some language or what-not, but I like this exactly the way it is, and I also want to read it when it's available!

HOW did she end up in bed with the hottest hellion in Rock and Roll?!

[[deleted user]]

It's a long and hilarious (I hope) story. Thanks, Nicole. I didn't em really agree with the suggestions either, mostly because it's a rom com and I think the rules can be a little different. Besides that's how the book begins, I didn't reveal any secrets.

[Jane]

Well I'm kinda late showing up and you already got lots of replies, but I wanted to say I totally agree, great as it is! (❛‿❛✿̶̥̥)

[[deleted user]]

Thanks!

[Danni]

I like it. It catches your attention but doesn't give too much away.