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Mar 09, 2018 02:27PM

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I agree. I would NEVER have guessed you weren't a native English speaker, you're just as talented as either me or Grace! (Maybe even more so than me... :)
Hi! So I believe I was put up to the task of creating a male profile, and I've just finished it. I don't know which twin you guys intend to create the drama with, but I hope it works. Let me know if there's anything you'd change!
Name: Laurence (Laurie) James
Birthday: December 7th
Age/Year: 18, 7th year
Appearance: Laurie is tall, 6’0”, and lightly muscled, and has fair skin. His face is completely covered in freckles, along with his shoulders, neck and back. His eyes are a dark green, and sort of large. He has a strong shaped nose, and rounded features, smooth cheeks but a square chin. His hair is wild and curly, a very dark brown, and he wears it somewhat long, but no past his ears. He has a really thin upper lip, and a thicker bottom, and a nice cupid’s bow and shallow dimpled cheeks. Laurie’s brow is heavy, but not intimidating looking. He always wears a thick gray, metal band on his right ring finger. When he smiles his eyes light up, and since he doesn’t like talking very much, he’s mastered the art of smiling with his eyes.
Personality: Laurie is very artistic, he loves to draw, ballroom dance, write poetry and play the violin. He considers the arts his life, and wants to someday be a professional artist, somehow make a living off of the hobby. Laurie is really polite, and empathetic. He can be a little shy, but he warms up to people quickly. Having such talents, he loves to draw other students, or just sit outside and observe nature, or draw strangers he sees in coffee shops in Hogsmeade, and he enjoys playing the violin in his common room where students stop and listen. He composes his own music, and plays classical pieces that everyone is familiar with. He’s very kind, but doesn’t talk very much, and he loves children. Laurie spends hours playing with his younger siblings, nieces and nephews. He invents games for them to play, teaches them to dance, and swings his nieces around the room, much to their pleasure. Laurie loves herbology, and often can be found in the greenhouses, in the forest, or castle grounds sketching everything from great tall trees to the tiniest of bugs. Laurie can be described as a little odd, but he’s very sweet.
History: Laurie grew up in a town called Stratford-upon-Avon, where the poet William Shakespeare was born. He lives in a large farmhouse with his mother, father, a younger brother and sister, his two older sisters and one of their husbands and three children, and his grandmother. Laurie loves his hometown, and often takes his siblings for walks around the town, sitting by the lakes and reading them his poetry or playing his music. Laurie loves living in such a busy house, it keeps life exciting.
Wand: 10 inches, dragon heartstring core, cherry
Patronus: swan
Family:
Mother/Daphne James
Father/Richard James
Sister/Ellie James (8)
Brother/Scott James (12)
Sister/Maggie James (24)
Sister/Caroline Law (29)
Brother-In-Law/Hugh Law
Niece/Diana Law (2)
Niece/Josephine Law (5)
Nephew/Gill Law (7)
Grandmother/Harriet Burbage
Name: Laurence (Laurie) James
Birthday: December 7th
Age/Year: 18, 7th year
Appearance: Laurie is tall, 6’0”, and lightly muscled, and has fair skin. His face is completely covered in freckles, along with his shoulders, neck and back. His eyes are a dark green, and sort of large. He has a strong shaped nose, and rounded features, smooth cheeks but a square chin. His hair is wild and curly, a very dark brown, and he wears it somewhat long, but no past his ears. He has a really thin upper lip, and a thicker bottom, and a nice cupid’s bow and shallow dimpled cheeks. Laurie’s brow is heavy, but not intimidating looking. He always wears a thick gray, metal band on his right ring finger. When he smiles his eyes light up, and since he doesn’t like talking very much, he’s mastered the art of smiling with his eyes.
Personality: Laurie is very artistic, he loves to draw, ballroom dance, write poetry and play the violin. He considers the arts his life, and wants to someday be a professional artist, somehow make a living off of the hobby. Laurie is really polite, and empathetic. He can be a little shy, but he warms up to people quickly. Having such talents, he loves to draw other students, or just sit outside and observe nature, or draw strangers he sees in coffee shops in Hogsmeade, and he enjoys playing the violin in his common room where students stop and listen. He composes his own music, and plays classical pieces that everyone is familiar with. He’s very kind, but doesn’t talk very much, and he loves children. Laurie spends hours playing with his younger siblings, nieces and nephews. He invents games for them to play, teaches them to dance, and swings his nieces around the room, much to their pleasure. Laurie loves herbology, and often can be found in the greenhouses, in the forest, or castle grounds sketching everything from great tall trees to the tiniest of bugs. Laurie can be described as a little odd, but he’s very sweet.
History: Laurie grew up in a town called Stratford-upon-Avon, where the poet William Shakespeare was born. He lives in a large farmhouse with his mother, father, a younger brother and sister, his two older sisters and one of their husbands and three children, and his grandmother. Laurie loves his hometown, and often takes his siblings for walks around the town, sitting by the lakes and reading them his poetry or playing his music. Laurie loves living in such a busy house, it keeps life exciting.
Wand: 10 inches, dragon heartstring core, cherry
Patronus: swan
Family:
Mother/Daphne James
Father/Richard James
Sister/Ellie James (8)
Brother/Scott James (12)
Sister/Maggie James (24)
Sister/Caroline Law (29)
Brother-In-Law/Hugh Law
Niece/Diana Law (2)
Niece/Josephine Law (5)
Nephew/Gill Law (7)
Grandmother/Harriet Burbage
I really like your idea with Laurie!! Let's do that. Grace do you want me to sort these three or would you rather do it?
Awesome! I'm going to go and read through their characters again then sort them.
While I'm at it, would you two mind sorting Laurie?
While I'm at it, would you two mind sorting Laurie?

oldest sister ⇝ 20
second oldest sister ⇝ 18
youngest sister ⇝ 12*
older brother ⇝16
younger brother ⇝ 12 *
youngest brother ⇝ 7 ½ (hes very specific on adding it in)
cousin ⇝ valentine ,15;
(Note: the ones with the little *'s are twins and Valentine is their cousin, he lives with them)


And I love Andy, Lanceon, and Oliver!
Thank you both! I've been lacking some creativity name wise haha!
Grace wrote: "Do you need help creating a character? Ask questions, collaborate, and get inspiration here!"
hi how can i made character?
hi how can i made character?
Grace wrote: "Do you need help creating a character? Ask questions, collaborate, and get inspiration here!"
hi how can i made character?
hi how can i made character?
Grace wrote: "Do you need help creating a character? Ask questions, collaborate, and get inspiration here!"
Hi how can i make a character?
Hi how can i make a character?

Thank you to everyone who has stepped in throughout this bit of a drought, I really appreciate it.