beta reader needed for YA/Fantasy

[I-Lanaa]

Hi,
My name is I-Lanaa Twine and this is my very first time on Goodreads! Really excited to be here but also a little nervous. I am looking for beta readers for my first full-length novel. It's my baby, but I am eager to have it critiqued, so I can improve. It is 140,000 words. I have no specific deadline, although it would be nice to have it back by the end of June. If you're interested, let me know :o). I will post a blurb below.


Delilah Simpson was your typical high school loner. Dressed in liquid eyeliner, oversized headphones and anything black, she kept to herself, got B’s and C’s, and never spoke up or stood out. She had a shortage of both suitors and companions, and with her dad’s job constantly relocating, she was always gone before anyone even noticed she had arrived…
But Delilah’s got a secret. Actually, it would seem she has quite a few. Secret number one...her mother wasn’t killed in a plane crash, she was kidnapped. Secret number two…her father isn’t so much of a travelling salesman, as he is a fugitive. Secret number three…her name isn’t really Delilah, and she isn’t so ordinary, after all.
But the biggest secret, was the one that changed everything. For there are things hidden amongst us. Things so terrible. Things so wonderful. You couldn’t conceive them in your wildest dreams.
Swept up in a world of magic and danger, she has learned to say and do whatever it takes to survive. To conquer all that cross her path. Until one day she encounters a force so powerful, she cannot escape it.
Derrick Harris is brilliant and beautiful, and he may be the best thing that has ever happened to her. It is very possible, that he might also be the worst.

[Dawn]

i wouldnt mind reading it, it sounds good!!!

[Elouise]

Hi, I would love to read this, and would be happy to give you feedback etc. I was wondering if you might be interested in doing the same for me? I am currently writing the second installment in what I hope to be a series, and would love someone to be able to point out things to me I might not see myself.

I have no synopsis for this work, as it is unfinished, but the first one is called Becoming Violet, and is on Goodreads. Look it up if you like.

Thanks

[I-Lanaa]

Elouise wrote: "Hi, I would love to read this, and would be happy to give you feedback etc. I was wondering if you might be interested in doing the same for me? I am currently writing the second installment in wha..."

Hey Elouise,
Absolutely :o). That would be great! I will look Becoming Violet up and get back to you as soon as I can. Can I send you a PDF via email? Send me your email address. Thanks again.