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message 1: by Anna (last edited Sep 08, 2016 11:10AM) (new)

Anna Kopp | 7 comments Hello! I'm looking for beta readers or critique partners for my YA f/f romantic fantasy novel. The novel stands at 78k words, but I'm only looking for help with the narrative of the first two chapters (though you are welcome to read the rest!). Willing to beta-trade as well. TIA!

Blurb:
Sixteen-year-old Princess Alana must marry. Her kingdom's waters are besieged by pirates, and an alliance is the only way to save it. All she wants is a Prince Charming (and to escape her overbearing mother), so when she meets Queen Salira and her dashing brother from a far away land she has no doubts about signing the marriage contract without even bothering to read it. Big mistake. As it turns out, her betrothed isn't the handsome prince, but the Queen herself.

Shocked and confused, Alana tries everything in her power to nullify the marriage - but it's too late. She is now stranded in a strange and dangerous country, betrothed to another woman. If that's not enough, war looms on the horizon and she's stuck right in the middle of it. Will she find her happily ever after, or will the secrets behind her marriage become her undoing?


message 2: by Gabriela (new)

Gabriela Vasquez-Rondon | 1 comments hello, my name is gabriela, i could help if you want


message 3: by Anna (new)

Anna Kopp | 7 comments Gabriela wrote: "hello, my name is gabriela, i could help if you want"

PMed you!


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