Beta reader/CP partner for fantasy novel

[Dakota]

I'm looking for beta readers for my fantasy novel. Will also swap and read your work as well :)

I am looking for feedback on character, plot, and overall reader opinion. If you are interested, I can sent over the first chapter so you can see if it's something you'd be interested in. Thank you in advance :)

The novel is about a princess who finds out that her father is using her marriage as a bargaining chip to a lesser lord of another country in exchange for helping overthrow that lord's king and the use of a ghastly and unholy horde the lord is planning to unleash over the realm. Instead of allowing her father to create chaos and ruin at the hands of those ancient and evil magical beasts, she decides to run off and create her own allies against her father.

If you are interested, please PM me or comment! I will swap if you have a work of your own. Genre doesn't matter, I read pretty much everything.

Thank you,

Kota

[Rachel]

Hello.

Are you still looking for someone to swap with? Because I would love to.

-Rachel

[Dakota]

absolutely! I would love to swap :) I'll send you a pm

[luki]

Hello, still looking for beta reader? i would love to become one.

[Rachel]

Lutfia, I can't speak for Dakota but I always welcome a new oponion

[Dakota]

Luftia, would you be interested in beta reading for me? I would love to have another opinion :)

[Dakota]

absolutely! Send me a PM with what you would like to swap with and how to contact you :)

[Christian]

Hi Dakota, I've got a 240k epic/dark fantasy novel that I'd be ready to swap. (to be honest, I'm in the middle of editing it-roughly 40% done-but I'll see beta reading as confirmation of the direction I'm going).

I've only done beta reading once and haven't received comments on the appreciation of what I did, but if that doesn't bother you, I'm all in to read and comment on your work.

Here's the blurb:

400 years ago, mankind was slave to the Vhaells, but a bloody rebellion changed the world forever as humans claimed their freedom from their masters with sword and sorcery.

Now, mankind is led by the militaristic Brotherhood of Khan, the man who once led mankind to freedom, Sorcery has been labeled as a heresy and the Brotherhood uses fear of the Vhaells to rule undisputed.

Marac is a former assassin, living off odd jobs on the streets, laying low to avoid attention. When he gets hired by a hunted man to steal a trinket and accompany his client into Fey territory, things quickly spiral out of control.

Alex is a young Lightbearer. Gifted with the power to bend heat and light to her will, she is helpless to prevent the massacre of the hidden monastery where she spend her last few years. As she fled, she'd been given an important task though, she has to warn other Ezekan monasteries that the Darkbearers have gathered their strength and that they're a threat once more.

Soren is a young officer of the Brotherhood of Khan, the first major noble to enlist. As he graduates, he's given the task of hunting down collaborators of a heretic who was recently sighted in Tyranor. As he starts investigating, he soons find out there is more to that heretic's tale than what he'd been told.

If you're interested, send me a mail: lotharon@hotmail.com

Christian