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Jul 29, 2016 11:46AM
((Sooooooo are we still waiting for something?))
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The hounds of death, eyes of red,
Hunt the flesh that is soon dead,
The dreams that haunt will end with death,
Unless heroes save the hell-god's chest,
Return what once was to that which is,
Return to Hades what is rightfully his.
A gift from death is life, indeed,
Unless you fail to preform his deed.
((It's okay. This isn't happening anymore. KC is leaving goodreads.))
Of course! I'd be honored to have my character in your fanfic!
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Welcome back KC! I can help you as best as i can. I haven't seen takemeaway since you left. I think you made 'em leave. kidding of course.
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So far I'd say your general ideas are pretty nice. I like how you added the sword changing colors with each kill! Is that going to symbolize something in the future? Or did you do it just for a cool effect?
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Hellhounds attack to reap a soul (In payment of some trespass. Probably because a promise to Hades has not been kept and those in camp are paying for it. Maybe all the victims are precious to the one who made the promise? Chiron? He is immortal, after all.)
Victory's daughter must pay the toll (Certain half-blood who has to go to Hades to make a bargain?)
A sword of festering, rotten death (Sword in your idea, perhaps)
Leads to the land devoid of breath
(Poseidon or Hades. I'm gonna say Hades.)
A bargain struck, the battle done, (Maybe a new bargain that nullifies Chiron, but has a heavy toll for the person who makes the deal.)
But in the end, who has truly won? (Pyrrhic victory.)
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Why does Hades want her? Is he trying to draw her to him to make a demand of her?
Personally, I really like the first prophecy. The Nike thing should definitely be it. When I first heard the prophecy and we were going to rp it, I thought Nike lost a bet and the sword was for Nike if she won. But being stubborn and always wanting to win, she stole the sword from Hades and gave it to you. Maybe the sword contains very important souls in it? Not a lot, but like 5 souls. Each one has their own color and their own power? Or maybe it contains a lot of souls with setimental value to Hades and everytime you kill something their soul goes in the sword changing its color to let you know their in there? Just blurting things out now. lol
Maybe Hades is sending hellhounds to bring you back to the Underworld and trap you so he can get his sword back?
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Thank you both very much! :) Yeah KC it was a good idea to come back here and get some ideas. I'll be here to blurt things out if you need any other ideas.
I thought it was a "Give me my sword or I'll take your life" type of thing. So in the end, you want to be able to barter and make a deal with him? Have him give you something for the sword? What if you find out in the quest that whatever Hades won from his bet with Nike was something she was originally going to give you. Does that make sense? So maybe you could barter what Hades won from Nike with the sword?
Ahhhhh okay! I'll see if I can think of anything else. Yeah, if you want to rp I'm ready anytime you are.
The rp? Yeah! Do we pretend there is no third person or is our rp not going to be of the quest?
Maybe we can pretend the third person is missing and we are looking for him? Outside of camp of course.
Okay sounds good! Does Anuki and Maxine already know the person is missing?
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