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ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Elian stop!" She ran after him. She grabbed his shoulder.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Leave me alone, I'm crazy," He said, keeping his steps quick. Even when she grabbed his shoulder, he walked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "No you're not." She said. "Please just stop for a second."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian didn't, he kept walking until he came upon the cemetery and walked inside.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia hesitantly followed. The graveyard wasn't a great place for somewhere like her.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian started looking and looking and looking for his parents graves even though somewhere in the back of his mind, he knew where they were.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia stayed at the entrance of the cemetery. She knew that taking a step forward would mean she would be bombarded with spirits demanding to be risen.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments At some point later, he found them. He sat between their graves and started talking to them. "I know you said you never wanted to see me," he said.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia took a deep breath and took a step in, and walked fast to through the graves. Her head was crowded with screams and cries, almost causing her to fall over, but she pushed through it until she reached him. Once standing behind him, she gasped. Standing behind the graves was his parents, smiling down at him. Only she could see them. "Elian," She whispered. "They're here."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "What?" Elian asked, standing up quickly and looking around. "Where?" He asked quickly.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She shook her head. "You can't see them because they're dead." She told him.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I want to see them," Elian said. "I want to know why they did it," he said, his voice thick with emotion. "Is it because I'm crazy? Is that why they left me?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Do you want me to ask them?" She asked him softly.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian nodded and looked around him in hopes of seeing them.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) (( could you be them? or like the mom or something? lol))

She nodded and faced them, taking a deep breath. "He wants to know why you left him." She asked.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Kim, his mom, tilted her head to the side.
"We couldn't take seeing him destroy himself... or his mind, for that matter. He's my only child and we didn't know how to help him. We hoped doing what we had done would make him realize that drugs and sleeping around aren't everything."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia listened, then recited every word back to Elian.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Kim spoke again, "he wasn't always like this." She said softly to Natalia. "He was a good boy, normal, before we died." He said. "Even the drugs didn't cause it," She told her. "I think it was our death... it drove him crazy."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She didn't recite this to Elian. Instead, she spoke directly to her. "He's mentally ill. There's a name for what he has." She said. "Addiction and sex was his way of coping."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Kim stood next to Elian and stroked his hair even when her hands went right through it. "I know," She said. "But there's something more than that... we've always known it, we just never knew what exactly. We still don't."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia raised her eyebrows. "I...I've sensed it to. I think...it has something to do with what I can do."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Kim nodded and gently touched his hand. Rob, his father, finally spoke. "Can you find out whats wrong with him?" He asked.
Elian looked at her, "what? Whats wrong with him?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I could try," she ignored Elian. "But it might take some time. I'll really have to delve into my ability, which isn't really a fun thing to do." She said.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Kim nodded, "we'll be here," she said and took her husbands hand. "Tell him we love him?" She asked and Rob nodded in agreement.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She looked at Elian. "They love you, Elian. Of course they wished they could have helped you more. I'm sure they would have if they were still here." She took his hand.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Kim nodded, "we would have." She said, "thank you, give Amelia a big hug and kiss for us, yeh?" She requested.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "We both will." She assured. "We'll keep in touch okay?"


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "What? Did they leave?" Elian asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "They will." She said. "You can say goodbye."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian nodded, "goodbye." He said quietly.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia smiled at them, then when she broke the connection, the others swarmed. She gasped and whirled around.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "What?" Elian asked, his eyes widening. "Whats wrong?"


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "We need to leave. Or I do. I can't.." she covered her ears.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Hey," Elian said softly, taking her hand and leading her out of the graveyard quickly.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She kept her ears covered and closed her eyes a couple of times as he led her out. She took a deep breath once they were out.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian wrapped his arms around her tightly, "I'm so sorry," he whispered. "This is all my fault."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She hugged him tight, shaking her head against his chest. "No no it's okay. I'm fine."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian nodded and picked her up before carrying her to his tattoo shop. Then he walked up to his apartment and laid her down there.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I did it for you." She breathed. She looked pale.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm sorry, you shouldn't have followed me. I'm so sorry, I forgot," Elian said, taking her hands again. "I'm selfish... I should've known better."


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Elian, stop." She said. "I'm fine. We do things like that for the people we love".


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian watched her, slightly shocked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) At first she didn't realize what she said. When she did, she blushed. "I mean...uh..."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I love you, too," Elian said after a moment. A smile tugged at his lips.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She looked up at him, eyes wide and hopeful. "Yeah?" She bit her lip.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He leaned forward without answering and pressed his lips to hers.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She closed her eyes and kissed him back, smiling against his lips.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He smiled against her lips, lifting a hand to his cheek.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She pulled away after a few seconds. "I love you." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He nodded and kissed her again, "I love you."


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