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Denise, Manufacturing Director
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Jun 30, 2016 05:46AM

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I didn't care for it. The alternating point of view was distracting and confusing to me, and the time seemed to move super quickly, as if it was a few scenes then Bam! a month has passed. In fact, this really felt like it was just a series of scenes strung together that spanned 2 months worth of time!
I didn't like Addison as a character. Yeah, she has abandonment issues, but she was fairly harsh with Jake throughout the entire book.
The premise is interesting enough, but I really didn't feel a connection to the characters at all, and on reading the blurb for the next book after seeing them in action in this one, I'm not interested in continuing the series.

I enjoyed it, didn't love it though. My favorite part was after Jake called it off, the tequila party. I'm not a big drinker but I loved the party. Oh, to have life long friends like them.
The last couple of books I've read along these lines had HEA endings but reached unsatisfactorially. At least this one carried it out a little better.

I enjoyed it, ..."
Yeah, I agree the accident/guilt thing was a bit abrupt after the discussion with Christina.
I did smile at that Breakup party! I especially liked how Mia took care of Addie when she got sick.
I'm glad this one worked out better for you! Wasn't great for me, but I'm glad one of us enjoyed it!
I won't be continuing on with the series, but if Karishma reads it and you both want to continue the series, I'd be happy to ask Mod Denise to keep the thread open for you and I'll update it. The next book comes out next month on the 9th, I believe.
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