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Robert (goodreadscomroregan2911) | 18 comments It was an idyllic Christmas morning. A slight dusting of snow outside, nothing major. 
Inside the house were all the decorations of the season. Lights glitter , the tree, pointsetas. You name it, we had it. 

One hour later. I would have given anything to be back in that place. But it wasn't to be. At least for the moment.



It all started with a pair of binoculars. It was in an unmarked box, Who got it for me I'll never know. Certainly none of my friends or loved ones. I'm not a real "outdoor-sy"type of person, so something like that wasn't even on my mind. Even so, seeing as they were there I carefully and unpacked them. (Worst case scenario, I could always sell them on eBay!)

I grabbed them now unpacked binoculars and peered through them. What I saw set me back a bit. Fluorescent colors, swirling, certainly not anything in the room. I quickly pulled him away not knowing what to make up what I just saw. I glanced around me, I was no longer in my living room, no tree no family, no nothing. I was in a room with four gray walls with no seeming exit. Off in the corner, To my right I saw the swirling,fluorescent lights I had seen earlier. 

Where was I, and how?


I close my eyes, and took a deep breath. "This can't be happening to me!" The thoughts raced through my mind.

The next thing I knew, I heard the sound of laughing ,of music. I was back home, as if I had never left. I looked around me, it seemed as if no one realized I never left. Or was this all in my head? I needed to know, and fast.


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Ruby (rubyyy) | 174 comments Mod
Ooooh interesting... I wanna know now! XD


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