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May 28, 2016 08:16PM
Ok shall we make characters or wing it. Also mind if he does kendo instead of football?
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Sure sounds fine to me and I'd prefer making a short character profile if that's alright with you.
That's fineName: Brian Miller
Gender: male
Age: 17
Appearance: Brian is a bit above average looking guy with short blonde hair, his bright blue eyes, his tone body, all of which most of the girls swooned over.
Sorry for the long wait, my notifications have developed a serious lag. Name: Jessica (Jess) O'Donnell
Age: 17
Appearance: Jess is quite short, standing at only five foot three. She has long wavy dark brown hair that reaches to just above her waist and has deep green eyes.
It's ok what was the full idea again?
Guy A was on top of the world, he was a straight A student, had a perfect girlfriend, and was the schools star quarterback. It seemed like there could be no way to make things any better.....that is until his girlfriend is murdered. At first he is grief stricken, just like everyone else in town. The police investigation seems to be going nowhere and the whole town seems to be missing a piece with the loss of his girlfriend. It just doesn't add up. Instead of sitting around any longer grieving, he decides to make himself useful and search for answers. He enlists the help of his deceased girlfriends twin sister, Girl A, and together they try and find out what exactly happened. But what happens when the investigation kicks off and Girl A starts receiving mysterious death threats? Was it possible that her sister had had a more tangled web of relations than she had led onto.
Hmm, maybe we could start it off at the point where Brian enlists the help of Jess? I think that would probably be the best way to start things out but idk.
There was a knock on the door, it was Brian still grieving over his dead girlfriend. He was at her house seeking her sister.
"I got it!" Jess yelled once she heard the knock on the front door. It was a mere formality, an echo from a past life. Her parents had hardly left their room since they had first found out. It was like they didn't remember, no, didn't care, that they still had one living, breathing daughter. She set her book to the side and went to the door, undoing all three deadbolts before she finally turned the handle and swung it open.
When Brian saw Jess his eyes reared up, he hadn't been over and even tried his best to avoid Jess at school because she looked so much like her sister when Brian started dating her. "He hello Jess" he said
"Oh....hi Brian." Jess replied awkwardly. He was about the last person she had been expecting to find on the other side of the door, he was the last person she had been hoping would be on the other side of the door. She anxiously bit her bottom lip and after standing there a moment she came to her senses, "....so, um, do you want to come in or.....?"
Brian nodded then followed her in but grabbed her hand and pulled her to the couch to sit. "Um I need to ask you a favor" he said. Still holding her hand
"....oh....okay." Jess answered, glancing over him skeptically. "What is it?" She asked, though she had a good, or bad rather, feeling that what ever was going to come out of his mouth was not going to be good.
"I umm... Please help me track down her killer, I'm begging you, I'll do anything if you help me" he said a little forced. He wanted her because she was the only one other then himself that knew more about her then anyone else.
Jess stared at him in shock a moment, letting her brain process his request. "Thats....crazy." She said at last. "The police are already working on it." She rationalized aloud. "I'm sure they will find something soon." She bit her bottom lip, the only outward indication she gave that suggested her words didn't quite match up to what she was thinking. She didn't quite believe that bit, if they were going to solve anything they should of already had a solid lead by now.
" I don't think their even trying to find her killer" Brian said then looking at the floor he said " please your the only one I trust to help me, you and me are the only two that really knew her"
Jess sat in silence, twisting the silver charm bracelet clipped around her wrist. It had a sun and a moon on it, a sort of joke gift that her sister had given her on her birthday last year. It had been a gentle jab at how different the twins personalities were despite their physical likeness. What her sister hadn't expected at the time was that the gag gift would tread so close to the truth. Jess took a deep breath. She knew Brian was right, they had given up on finding her twin's killer long ago. If they wanted closure they would have to find it themselves. "....Alright, how do we begin?"
"Um well we start by you hacking the police computers to see what little the do know" he said no wing unlike her sister she was a computer wiz
"Right." Jess murmured aloud, twisting a a strand of her long dark hair as she always did when she was anxious or having second thoughts. "because the right way to kick off something crazy is by committing a felony."
"Well it's not like they would give it to us normally" he said then reached over and gently brushed some hair from her face. "And if we are caught I'll take the blame" he said
Jess thought for a moment, weighing her options.".....Don't worry, a good hacker knows how to cover their tracks." She replied with a sigh, making it indirectly obvious that she was giving into his request. She hadn't been worried about getting caught, it was just the idea that unnerved her. She stood up from the couch, taking a deep breath, "come on, let's get this thing over with before I talk myself out of it."
