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Lokrow's Nest > 'The Traveller'. Your thoughts, tips, reviews, advices and so on...

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message 1: by alessia (new)

alessia (classick) Pretty good, I like how the traveller talks about the end. :) Maybe you could turn it into a short novel, instead of just a short story, if you have a story line in mind.


message 2: by arabella (new)

arabella | 30 comments Cool story I really like it


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