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message 1: by Alec (new)

Alec Nortan | 4 comments or two...
I've got a YA fantasy book, M/M romance that I'd like someone to read to tell me if there are any inconsistencies, plot holes, or parts that aren't clear enough. It's about 77k long. Please, let PM me if you're interested.


message 2: by Teresa (new)

Teresa | 171 comments I would be interested. Can you tell us more about the book?


message 3: by Alec (new)

Alec Nortan | 4 comments Hi. Of course. Pitchs are not my strength, but here is what the story is about .
Eric, a French guy travels to Aberdeen to find a job. There, he gets kidnapped and brought to a lone mansion in montana. At first he thinks his two kidnappers are crazy, talking about impossible things, but when he discovers that they are dragon-shifters, his whole world changes. This discovery puts his own life in jeopardy, and the only way for him to survive could be to help his kidnappers. And if he thought things couldn't be more difficult, his heart decides to take his own path.

Just tell me if you need other infos.


message 4: by Teresa (new)

Teresa | 171 comments Hi,

I wasn't asking for a pitch, but to have some idea of the plot line. I have read some stories that go form one erotic scene to another with little story line. While that is Ok, but I prefer to read a book that focuses on a story first. Your book sounds very interesting and I would love to help you. I have bet read before if that can help you.

Teresa


message 5: by Alec (new)

Alec Nortan | 4 comments If you want, I can send you the first chapters. This way, you can see if you like the story and are okay to beta read it. There are no descriptions of erotic scenes.
I've seen that you also write reviews? I have a short novella just published, and the second part about to come out. If you'd like to review them, I can sendthem to you.


message 6: by Teresa (new)

Teresa | 171 comments I have been reviewing books for at least ten years. I have many reviews up at Goodreads.
I would love to beta read them. Do you want me to add my edits in the text in color. That is what we did the last time I beta read for an author. It seemed to be of some help. My addi is:

teresaeick@gmail.com

Be talking to you,

Teresa


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