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message 1: by Michael (new)

Michael Chatfield | 12 comments Hey there!
With Sci-fi I've found it's rather hard to get betas and since I love reading scifi I thought it might be neat to do some beta swaps!
I have two books I want to swap, pick whichever one you want to swap!

Sacremon
The corporations control everything- from Earth’s government, to the colonies they use as factories.

Though not everything runs as smoothly as the corporations want. People will always want to rebel against low wages and poor conditions.

The corporations turned to the slum dwellers of Earth that lay beneath their mega-towers and stations to restore their order to the colonies. These slum dwellers made up Earth’s Military Forces or EMF.

Mark Victor and his brother Tyler’s recorded birth say that they are now old enough to join the EMF, leaving the slums and their gang behind. The EMF offers education, medical care, food whenever they want it and real pay. There’s even a chance they might get a pension at 40 years service!

So what if they have to put down a few rebellions, they survived the slums of Earth. Nothing could be as bad as the slums, right?

They’ll find out when they get to their first colony–Sacremon.


From Furies Forged
The Kalu aren’t a long lost nightmare anymore.
They came from the black.
They destroyed Rosho.
They ravaged Heija.
That was just the scouting force.
Their coming back.

Power those reactors, charge those rail cannons and ready the fighters. The Free Fleet is going to war.

Reply, PM or email me at mikec-@hotmail(dot)co(dot)uk


message 2: by Shailyn (new)

Shailyn Cotten | 4 comments Hello! If you're still looking for a beta swap, I'd love to trade chapters and see if we're a good match! I'd love to take a look at Sacremon. My manuscript is a 75k science fiction thriller. Let me know if you're interested, or just reach out to me here: scotten@sva.edu


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