7-minute story looking for reviews/feedback

[John]

I would love for you to read my new short suspense/thriller story, "Passion's Paroxym," and let me know what you think. It takes around 7 minutes to read!

http://cemeterygatesmedia.tumblr.com/...

[Purvi]

To be genuinely honest, one of the most neat and well styled stories I've read in a while, the perfection is smooth as butter.

[John]

Thanks, Purvi! I'm really happy you enjoyed it. It's the first time I've written that type of story.