Too Late by Colleen Hoover - Wattpad Ongoing

[Deanna]

OMG! THAT ENDING!!!! I need an epilogue!

[Erika]

Finished (view spoiler)[ so I'm super happy that Luke doesn't die, but I don't know about anybody else but I need more!!!!! Like what happens to Asa? Does Luke become a Spanish teacher? Does Sloan have to testify? I mean... This is just not fair. It's like I've been on this high and than...nothing. I have to hand it to Ms. Hoover she's a genius (view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Vega_girl]

I think she will write another...(view spoiler)[..I mean she literally said this is the start of a new book with miracles>/spoiler> (hide spoiler)]

[Erika]

Vega_girl wrote: "I think she will write another...[spoilers removed]"

Yea (view spoiler)[ the question is when?????(view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Chris]

I couldn't agree more!! An epilogue at the least or another book!! I definitely need more!!!

[Deanna]

I hope so!

[DJacelyn]

Me too, epilogue or another book please!!!

[Deanna]

Did you guys see she added an epilogue today!!! (view spoiler)[She better be writing a sequel because she made it even worse! That Asa! (hide spoiler)]

[Chris]

Deanna wrote: "Did you guys see she added an epilogue today!!! [spoilers removed]"

OMG I didn't think we would get one!! Thanks for letting us know!!

Epilogue (view spoiler)[Holy cliff hangers Asa is going to get off!! There has to be another book now!!!!!! (hide spoiler)]

[Grace]

Epilogue (view spoiler)[Why is CoHo torturing us? But I did love the epilogue! It's the most fitting conclusion, I think. Perfect! (hide spoiler)]

[Daiane]

Jesus! I hate her! Why would she do that? Why?!?! And I took a look here at the book and there is no talk about any series. She has to write something, right? At least a spoiler or something! I hope so or else, I'm going Asa on her butt!

[Deanna]

SHE DID IT AGAIN and added more! (view spoiler)[Holy moly! That was insane. I want a Ryan book now! (hide spoiler)]

[Erika]

Epilogue for the epilogue (view spoiler)[ Okay that was the craziest ending. Now I have to say having sex in front of Asa might of felt good, but yuck!!!!! I get the revenge it was the best for him but as I was reading I felt like I was watching a dirty movie. Still I must say, Colleen is the queen of all writers!!!!! (view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Deanna]

Erika wrote: "Epilogue for the epilogue [spoilers removed]"

I so agree!

[Grace]

Epilogue continued (view spoiler)[That was great, but I'm creeped out by THAT scene. It was gross and I agree with Erika. I'm not sure how Asa didn't pass out from his multiple gunshot wounds... (hide spoiler)]

[Chris]

Epilogue for the epilogue (view spoiler)[Well that whole sex in front of Asa thing was a bit much for me, but Asa was an over the top character so I guess hurting him in an over the top way made sense..,,*scratches head* I agree with Deanna and wish we could get a Ryan book! (hide spoiler)]

[Chris]

Prologue (view spoiler)[ wow that was pretty disturbing. What's even more disturbing is some of the comments people wrote in favor of Asa! I think it shows that yes Asa had a lot of issues, but what he did to Sloan was wrong. (hide spoiler)]

[Erika]

Prologue(view spoiler)[ I didn't read the comments and as I was reading this in the beginning it read like a love story. In my head I was like aww, I see the attraction but that changed when Asa became desperate and stopped respecting what Sloan wanted. (view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Chris]

Erika wrote: "Prologue[spoilers removed]"

Agreed!! (view spoiler)[It gave you even more insight into Asa's mind. He totally had to have Sloan, to claim her since she was so innocent. And seeing where she came from and how she got caught up in it all, how confusing it was what happened to her was understandable. It definitely leaves you thinking about it, but for me it just made me see how much Asa needed some help. It's disturbing to me how messed up his mind is from his childhood and though I don't think he was in anyway trying to hurt Sloan, he took such advantage of her as a way to claim her as his. Crazy!!!!! (hide spoiler)]

[Deanna]

I agree with both of you! (view spoiler)[Still crazy and a little disturbing, though! (hide spoiler)]

[Erika]

Extended Epilogue to the prologue to the epilogue of the epilogue (view spoiler)[ Asa is a psycho, there are no other words for him...and she's pregnant? Asa thinks it's his??? How much more crazy can he get?!?!?!?! I'm sure Ms. Hoover will show us. I can't wait...(view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Deanna]

Erika wrote: "Extended Epilogue to the prologue to the epilogue of the epilogue [spoilers removed]"

(view spoiler)[It better not be his! I don't think it is, but Asa is freakin' crazy! (hide spoiler)]

[Chris]

Deanna (A Novel Glimpse) wrote: "Erika wrote: "Extended Epilogue to the prologue to the epilogue of the epilogue [spoilers removed]"

[spoilers removed]"

Oh yes I love the crazy mind of Asa!!! (view spoiler)[oh god I hope that baby isn't Asa's he should never reproduce, but the fact that he thinks it is is scary! Poor Sloan! Hope we get more! (hide spoiler)]

[Deanna]

Chris wrote: "Deanna (A Novel Glimpse) wrote: "Erika wrote: "Extended Epilogue to the prologue to the epilogue of the epilogue [spoilers removed]"

[spoilers removed]"

Oh yes I love the crazy mind of Asa!!! [sp..."

I agree! But (view spoiler)[I feel like Sloane wouldn't have had Asa's baby, if was his. I think she's too repulsed by him. (hide spoiler)]

[Chris]

Deanna (A Novel Glimpse) wrote: "Chris wrote: "Deanna (A Novel Glimpse) wrote: "Erika wrote: "Extended Epilogue to the prologue to the epilogue of the epilogue [spoilers removed]"

[spoilers removed]"

Oh yes I love the crazy mind..."

Good point!!!

[Chris]

Chapter 51 (view spoiler)[I had a feeling she wouldn't no who the father is. Luke is so GOOD hearted and kind. Poor Sloan I wouldn't want to have Asa's baby. (hide spoiler)]

[Vega_girl]

Eek!!!!

[Erika]

Part 54(view spoiler)[ I just can't take this!! How the hell is he in the apartment with her, I mean he's freaking rapping her. Is he dreaming? Somehow I don't think this is what's happening here. Ms. Hoover is a terrible, terrible person...my heart can't take this. It's like we went from, " were pregnant and we're happy" to...Asa rapping her. Poor Sloan...and where the hell is Luke?(view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Chris]

Part 56 (view spoiler)[I seriously don't no how Sloan was able detach herself and convince Asa she still loved him. So happy she didn't put out the garbage!!!! So glad Luke killed him, no hesitation on the second shot. The multiple rapes was brutal. I sure hope we get another now HEA epilogue!!! It would be nice if the baby was actually Luke's but Asa said he did mess with her birth control. Either way Asa is gone and as far as Luke is concerned he's the dad. :) (hide spoiler)]

[Deanna]

The end? (view spoiler)[ I hated that Asa raped her and we never found out who the dad is. (hide spoiler)]

[Beatrice]

Frustrating...
For a Cop, Luke is so amateur!!! How come surveillance was not all around the place? Asa was even more psychopath than before and the rapes were just cruel!
It would be even more frustating not to have a HEA and get to know whose baby that is....

[Erika]

Deanna (A Novel Glimpse) wrote: "The end? [spoilers removed]"

I soooooo agree (view spoiler)[ I need to know who the baby daddy is. The fact that she gets raped...I feel like it wasn't addressed afterwards. I could use another book(view spoiler)[ (hide spoiler)] (hide spoiler)]

[Vega_girl]

Oh my gosh!!! This is too good not to re-post!!!
This is CoHo's latest Facebook post!! I laughed so hard!!
Please do not dissect the following post too thoroughly with the intention of finding something personally offensive. I'm both concerned AND amused by the honest confusion I speak of in this post, so this is all in fun. Except for #7.

There's a character in one of my books that is legit screwed up. His actions, his thoughts, the things that spew from his mouth. Throughout the whole book, he says and does things that are morally incomprehensible at best.
Readers love to hate him.
Toward the end of the book while we're in his POV, there's a paragraph of thought where he talks about this country and how screwed up the judicial system is. His rationale is ridiculous, but that's the least of his issues.
I can't stop laughing and I'm also a tiny bit concerned, because there are some people who are legit pissed off at me about this character's thoughts in this particular scene. I've received a lot of feedback about this part of the story in particular. Warnings stating, "THIS is how an author loses readers!" and "Authors should never use their novels to promote their own political agendas!"
Y'all!
This character raped people. He murdered people. And it's his POLITICS that pushed people over the edge? Me thinks we have some priorities out of whack.
I'm scared some of us are forgetting that authors are not the characters they create. Thankfully, the majority of us know the difference and appreciate when characters are over-the-top. But for those who do not understand the concept of imagination, I've compiled a fun list of pointers on how to read a work of fiction and get the most out of the experience.

1) When a character murders someone in a scene, do not call the police in real life. No one was actually murdered. It's just a book.

2) When a character cheats on his/her significant other, do not assume the author does not know how to be monogamous in his/her own marriage. It's just a book. (This pointer was written specifically for my husband, who still hasn't made it past the first five chapters in Maybe Someday because he struggles with where the line is drawn between his wife's imagination and his wife's actual morals.)

3) If a character doesn't believe in God, chances are, this does not mean the author worships Satan. Please do not send promotional religious materials in the mail to the author. The author's soul is probably fine.

4) Sometimes authors make up entire cities. If you see that Plethora, Maine, is not actually a real city in Maine, the author probably made it up because it's fiction and making up fake towns is fun. You don't have to refer to the author as a "geographical idiot" in your message to them. :)

5) If you read a book and a character says something homophobic or racist, that means the character is homophobic or racist. It does not mean the author shares the same views as the character who is a pathetic homophobe or racist.

6) If a character slut-shames another character, this does not mean the author is slut-shaming, nor does it mean the author negatively judges people who have slutty tendencies. In fact, the author could very well be an actual slut in real life, while writing through the POV of a virgin who thinks everyone in her life is a whore.

7) Book boyfriends are not real!
OMG I'm just kidding. Seriously, I'm kidding, they're totally real. I didn't mean to scare you. I'm sorry, this was just mean.

8) If an author writes a character who is a hard-core republican, it doesn't mean the author is in love with Donald Trump. If a character assassinates a republican candidate in a work of fiction, it does not mean the author is a democrat with a death wish on all republicans. In fact, some authors (Me. I'm talking about me) are politically ignorant and embarrassed at their lack of political knowledge, but they still sometimes write about characters who are not politically inept.

That's all I have for right now. If you know someone who struggles with any of the above, I hope these guidelines for reading fiction can help. May we all continue to respect the imagination for what it is...A beautiful and terrifying place that does not actually exist.

*No sluts, aside from the author, were shamed in the writing of this post.

[Erika]

I just love me some CoHo!!!!

[Vega_girl]

Right?!?! She is hilarious!!! People are way to serious.....

[Erika]

Exactly, I mean look at all the shows and movies that portray the same things, what makes a book any different?

[DJacelyn]

Me too!!! I just love CoHo!!! Just because Asa is a crazy person doesn't mean the Author is.

I really don't understand why some people are so mean, will make such mean comments. (From what I read in CoHo's reply above).

[Deanna]

Love this!

[Candyce]

Erika wrote: "Exactly, I mean look at all the shows and movies that portray the same things, what makes a book any different?"

I totally agree!

[Chris]

OMG CoHo is the BEST!! That made me laugh so hard!!! Great and fun reminder to the people who write those unnecessary comments!

[DJacelyn]

I love the way CoHo rebutted back. Why are there such people who write mean comments!

[Chris]

I'm so stupid I didn't know there was tie up chapter 57 (view spoiler)[I really liked that Sloan went to Asa's funeral for closure and that no one was there. Sad but that's what Asa deserved. Glad she at least addressed that Sloan was in therapy. And I'm totally okay with Luke choosing not to do the paternity test. He loves Dalton as his and that is wonderful! (hide spoiler)]