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message 1: by Edward (new)

Edward Jamieson (edwardjamieson) | 27 comments Hi everyone.
I gave my new book to an editor. Now I have it back, but I need a beta read to make clear whether there are still issues or not, if it sounds English.

Synopsis: Jonathan wakes up in a desert, his past wiped from his head. He’s alone having no clue who and what he is, where he has come from and where he should go. There is only one way – forward when he spots a little town in the distance.
Empty streets, old houses, the town seems abandoned. There’s no one to ask for help, there’s nowhere to go. Jonathan wanders the town in search of any sign of life trying to bring his lost memories back, but odd visions haunt him from time to time. Soon Jonathan comes to the realization that he’s moments from death as absolutely evil dwells in the town seeking fresh souls to suck up. The seemingly dead town is only outwardly empty.
Grey skies, no sun, no days and no nights. The town is stuck in time. With only one entrance and one exit, but the way leading to the exit is filled with creations that Jonathan has never envisioned, even in his worst nightmares.
Who is he? Who brought him here? With a female resident – Elizabeth, Jonathan has to work his way through the horrendous town, figure out his past and find the exit.

Who can help me? I need somebody to read two or three chapters and give me an opinion.

Thank you.


message 2: by Rachael (new)

Rachael Isaacson | 7 comments I would be happy to help. Email to rachaelmarieisaacson@gmail.com


message 3: by S.W. (new)

S.W. Fairbrother (swfairbrother) Hi, I can't offer to beta read, as I'm completely overwhelmed at the moment, but I just wanted to say your synopsis sounds awesome :)


message 4: by Edward (new)

Edward Jamieson (edwardjamieson) | 27 comments S.W. wrote: "Hi, I can't offer to beta read, as I'm completely overwhelmed at the moment, but I just wanted to say your synopsis sounds awesome :)"

Thank you. I hope the others will think as you do.


message 5: by Ashley (new)

Ashley (thesecretbookshelf) | 6 comments I would love to beta read your new book! The description sounded really good; I am already interested! If you want me to help, just private message me!


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