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Let's get THE AMARANTH CHRONICLES: DEVIANT RISING into Quill!
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I can't think of any tips on presentation since the page already looks better than anything I could have done. To Alxander: have you also been doing a good deal of face to face and direct message/email pitching within your own network? I'm assumung yoy have, but if not then you should. I know I hamstrung myself by being unable to get over my own social anxiety enough to make more than a token approach at direct pitching to my own friends, family, and general social network.

Frankly me and my Co-author are very surprised too. Our original release of the book actually did fairly well for self publishing. We've had a Facebook group thats been about 300-400 people strong for about 3 years. We had hoped we would have sold more copies by now and only managed a 9th place spot in the Sword and Laser: The Sequel contest. I've been hitting gaming and tabletop conventions for the last three weekends and have been giving out cards. I've spent close to $500 on Facebook Ads and $300 on google ads. We've done contests to give away some of our 3D printed spaceship models but even with all of our efforts we've remained largely invisible.
http://www.shapeways.com/shops/byteshop
As disheartening as our numbers have been this has cemented one VERY promising thing for us. I've always said that this story was Deus Ex (Video game) meets Firefly (TV show) and I can't imagine two more culty, underground, beloved but hardly known about stories.
This book, this series, and the animated series we're hoping to do one day, has been our life's work for the last 7 years. That being said there is so SO much more material we're holding back hoping just to get this first story out there. We're about 45% finished with our sequel and have very VERY detailed 3D models of all of the vehicles and ships from our story ready to be experiences in Occulus Rift. Our ultimate goal has always been to write a trilogy that would launch our CG series. Late last year, before Chris and I found Inkshares and decided to submit our story to the contest we were even working on a video game:
http://deviantrising.tumblr.com/post/...
Since our campaign has started we've had to put the game on the back burner.
We're very thankful for you guys. Even if we can't hit our Quill mark this has by no means been a bad experience and I am deeply touched and enriched to found a social network with other established and budding authors. I just don't know anyone in real life that's passionate about story telling and i'm thankful I've found all of you guys.
Our hope now is to get a campaign extension, if they even do that.

I am grateful in a way I can barely express for that.





I've got several people I think I can get to order, and I'll tweet regularly about this. That's all I can think of off the top of my head...

https://www.inkshares.com/books/the-a...


First, this link appears broken: https://www.facebook.com/AmaranthNovel/
You want to make sure all your social media links are up to date and that all your social media (including your email signature) point to your funding page -- extra points for having it link to the referral link.
I don't have any mind blowing suggestions on how to find new audience as I'm still trying to figure that out myself, but I bet all the Quill authors will be able to help with suggestions on how to get that last 100 readers. Once you figure that out be sure to come back and share here!
I also think you need to put that description -- "Deus Ex meets Firefly" right up there at the top of your page. Let visitors know exactly what kind of book they are looking at. Give the elevator pitch in the first couple of sentences on your page and make the visitors drool over your book.
Have you considered a shorter book trailer? I know I myself am daunted by an 8 minute video. Most of the ones I have seen are about a minute in length and dive right into the heart of the book and why it's so awesome. Especially since you have all this new artwork.
Question: Is this a graphic novel? I'm a little confused at all the artwork amazing at is it. With all the models and character concepts and such, this doesn't look like a standard novel. If it isn't, then you have a unique angle you can share with the press etc. If it is a traditional novel, then maybe put more writing up front and the concepts and such as supplemental? I dunno, just a thought.
I'll keep thinking, but I sort of want to see what you would do with an ARG. The one I did for DHM didn't really take off, but it was a ton of fun and does broaden the canon of the world for anyone observant enough to find it.

You're right I;ll post the short description.
Believe it or not the video was originally 22 minutes long and that 8 minute version was the chopped down one. I do need a trailer but... Hmm... Let me figure out how to do that.
This will be a graphic novel as well as an animated series. I plan on doing a youtube video explaining that and just how far along we are as soon as I get a moment.
SO far I've released 31 chapters along with the art....
Thank you so much for your feedback and support!




How's it going on your end, Alexander?
And does anyone have any ideas on how to push in new ways?

Things have been slow on my end. Chris and I just finished our manuscript last week. The CEO had originally reached out to me about a month ago to try and get a copy of our manuscript but he's all but disappeared since then...
Right now Chris and I are working on a book trailer that will tell the main story arch and be filled with some one the art pieces we've been posting.
Other than that I'm kind of out of ideas.
What are you guys thinking?

https://www.inkshares.com/books/the-a...

154 orders to go in 12 days. I know that's a massively tall order, but I only became aware of the dire situation tonight,
I'm shooting an email to Alexander now with a link to this Johnslist,
Alexander, when you read this, my first suggestion would be posting a nice blurb advertising your book that us fellow authors could send out on our reader updates. (See the Dax Harrison Johnslist or some of the other Johnslist feeds for examples)
Fellow authors, let's talk! :)