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message 401: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby Suddenly I woke with a start. "Uh....Huh? *cough cough* What the...No!" Suddenly I'm wide awake. "kmae, stop! Stop! You're letting out..." I fall asleep again.


message 402: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby kmae stops, and the roots pull me down into the ground. Suddenly the gas clears and the room is totally silent. I'm gone in the earth and kmae is frozen in place with shock.


message 403: by [deleted user] (new)

"What! NO! Ruby! Can you hear me!?!?" I shout into the dirt. I pound on the ground where Ruby had been. My shock turned to sadness. "Who..." I mutter. Suddenly my shock turns to anger. "No. I won't let it happen. Not again." I growl. I let out a high pitch large whistle and I hear Arnold whimpering near by. It was silent, but then I hear the stamped coming at me. A herd of wilderness animals stopped in front of me. From huge bears to field mice were present. "All diggers, dig hear," I gestured to the spot where Ruby was. "And look for a girl intertwined in roots. Stampede-rs, get ready for escape rout 122." I commanded in critter clicks and growls. They all nodded and went to work. I looked over to Maj and Arnold. Arnold was sitting at attention, a waiting orders. "Oh! Uh..." I was shocked that he was obeying. "Join the diggers in the search." I commanded. He understood and went to work. I took out my dagger and helped cut up the roots coating the dirt's surface. Some rodents passed out in the process, but other than that, it was just drowsy work.


message 404: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby After a while my head popped out of the ground. I was staring off into space, but after a few good slaps on the face, I woke up. I coughed a few times then gasped. "Mom." I passed out again.


message 405: by [deleted user] (new)

"Come on, Ruby! Be ok. You have to be ok." I pleaded. She was breathing, just unconscious. I did a dog whistle. "Hey! Fauzzy!" a large brown bear lumbered over. "I need you to take him to the ride." I grunted and growled. I pushed Ruby onto his back and Fauzzy took him to the ride. I knelt down by where we were digging. I picked up a wilted root about 2 inches long. I'll figure that out later. I stuffed it in my pocket as a sample. I walked over to our way out of the Rockies. A huge nest like carriage had been built. George was harnessing up the animals who were to pull us out of here. Ruby was laying in the nest, still passed out.


message 406: by [deleted user] (new)

I think this is more fun. It's like improv.

suddenly thunder rumbles. I look up and the owl stares back down at me. I have been claimed by Athena. But then another symbol hovers above me. Hades symbol what how is this possible. I can't be claimed by two gods. No this can't be but sure enough the thunder rumbles again. " ok u guys. Please tell me I'm seeing things. Hades and Athena. This makes not sense."


message 407: by Maj (last edited Jul 09, 2014 09:14AM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Maj Arnold nudges me. "Kmae, I'm sorry. I didn't mean- I-" I stop. "Will she be all right?"

Then a flash catches my eye.

"Zaynah?" I ask. "We're gonna be bunk mates?! Awesome!"


message 408: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I wake up with a start. This time I drink a few glasses of water and say, "I-I saw her... My mom... she was giving me a messege... a warning..."


message 409: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby Then i pass out again.


message 410: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby But only for a moment, I wake up, and this time, for good.


message 411: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh yeah. Maj. This should be fun. Has anyone else noticed he Athena and hades sign hovering on top of me. I can't be claimed by 2 gods.


message 412: by [deleted user] (new)

Ruby. are you ok u look flustered


message 413: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I stare off into space. After a while I say, "My mom. She-She spoke to me. She said.... it was a warning. I must go... I can't stay... My mom... she can do many things... I..." I try to stand, but I collapse back on the bench in exhaustion.


message 414: by Maj (new) - rated it 3 stars

Maj "WOW. OK. Back up!" I yell. "I thought we only had one godly-ish parent. And now all of a sudden Zaynah has two? And Ruby has been contacted by her mom? How? What's going on here? And Kmae, you still owe me an explanation..."


message 415: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby Panting, I say, "Zaynah has not only one, but two godly parents... making Zaynah a godly kid, too..."


message 416: by [deleted user] (new)

"An explanation. Yes. About this." I gesture to the wildlife all around. "I know. But we have more important matters right now." I say to her. I turn to Ruby. "Just take it easy, ok? Your mom spoke to you. A warning. Do you remember what about?" I said, concerned. "Oh! Your hurt!" I say when I see a cut on her arm. "Let me help!" I reach for the wound but she flinches away. "Its alright. I can heal you." I say calmly. "Maj and Zaynah. I need you guys to figure out what... what that is." I gesture to the signs hovering above Zaynah's head. "While your at it, find a bucket of water from a stream. Its just a few yards West." I point in the direction.


message 417: by [deleted user] (new)

I think we need to... Ok call me crazy but the only lerson wi the answers must be the oracle. Not the camp oracle. But the real oracle. He lives in olympus. Not with the gods but on the opposoing island.


message 418: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 09, 2014 09:32AM) (new)

I need to know how i have to god parents amd how ruby is able to talk yo her mom and how suddenly kmae has disappeared. Maj ...seems your the only sane one here


message 419: by [deleted user] (new)

Zaynah {❤Edward Cullen❤...❤Tobias Eaton❤...❤Magnus Bane❤} wrote: "I need to know how i have to god parents amd how ruby is able to talk yo her mom and how suddenly kmae has disappeared. Maj ...seems your the only sane one here"

(I never disappeared.)


message 420: by Ruby (last edited Jul 09, 2014 09:38AM) (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby Suddenly, I cross my eyes and sit up. "La la lalalaalalaaaaaa I'mmmm aaa faaaiirrryyyyy" I begin flapping my arms wildly about but before I try to fly, kmae catches my arm, stopping me before i kill myself.


message 421: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I meant suddenly i cross my eyes sry


message 422: by Maj (new) - rated it 3 stars

Maj rubyfirewoods12 wrote: "I meant suddenly i cross my eyes sry"

(You do know you can edit posts.... right?)


message 423: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 09, 2014 09:36AM) (new)

Oh there you are kmae. Ok. This sign isnt going. Its annoying. Do you think...


What in the name of hades is that noise. Woaooooooah. Screaming. I look aroung. Can no one hear it. Screams. AAAAH MAKE THAT STOP. WHAT IS ThAT


message 424: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (oh right i forgot lol)

I continue trying to flap around and singing that I'm a fairy.


message 425: by [deleted user] (new)

Make it stop. Someone stop that please. GODS THAT SCREAM BLOOD CURDLING. WHERE IS IT COMNG FROM. IN MY HEAD? HOW?


message 426: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby Suddenly I come back to my senses long enough to say, "Yup, it's all in your head, probably because of my...MOM!!!!! OOOHHH NOOOO!!" But I begin crossing my eyes and flapping about before I could say anything else.


message 427: by Maj (last edited Jul 09, 2014 01:56PM) (new) - rated it 3 stars

Maj I look at Zaynah. "Well, yeah... When you spent quit some time in the underworld, you'd have to be.... And the screaming is something you'll get used to, though they have kind of respect for you 'cause your Dad rules the place." Then I start thinking. "Kmae. You know exactly where you are. And the wild life. Are you-" Then I stop. No, I think. She didn't tell, so why would I do it for her... "Zaynah, buy me a sandwich when we're done, we're going to New York." I grab her hand, and before she can object we stand in the middle of the entrance hall of the Empire State Building.

I walk over to the security guy. "600th floor, please."


message 428: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 09, 2014 09:45AM) (new)

MAJ. What the..., Aaaaah. Can someone stop that screaming. It hurts! AAAOOOW! PLEASE STOP. SOEMOEN DYING. SOEMOEN IN PAIN HELP THEM....
suddenly everybting goes silent and inhear a voice." Come...come to the place where it all begun and retirieve what has been lost. Save what has been taken and fix what has been torn. Tell them all for all has been taken from them


message 429: by [deleted user] (new)

Maj stop!


message 430: by [deleted user] (new)

(Ok. Maj, you made this very confusing. How did you get to the Empire State Building? What is happening? I am totally lost.)


message 431: by Maj (new) - rated it 3 stars

Maj (I am a daughter of Hades.... I shadowtravel....)


message 432: by Maj (new) - rated it 3 stars

Maj I look at Zaynah. "Thought you wanted to go up?" The security guy looks at me with a no-idea-what-you're-talking-about look. "Give us a sec." I say, with my politest smile.

"Zaynah? What's wrong? You look.. Bad." I say. "And not just because I took you on a surprise trip to New York."


message 433: by [deleted user] (new)

Maj wrote: "(I am a daughter of Hades.... I shadowtravel....)"

(Oh. Right. Thanks. ;-) )


message 434: by [deleted user] (new)

Maj. weve got too go back. Those screams. that voice. Someone's dying and we can stop that from happenng. someones taken our loved ones and theyll die if we dont save them. the voice..the screams...the message...we have to go back to where this all began...it said

Come...come to the place where it all begun and retirieve what has been lost. Save what has been taken and fix what has been torn. Tell them all for all has been taken from them


message 435: by [deleted user] (new)

lets go...i say tugging her towards the exit. we have to get ruby and kmae...or we can go alone.


message 436: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (sooo where exactly am I during all this?)


message 437: by [deleted user] (new)

((WELL MAJ HAS TO SHADOWTRAVEL BACK...wait i am a kid of hades i cna do that!!!!))

i grasp a persistent maj and shadow travel back to where kmae and ruby stand flustered and obviously annoyed at being life in the dark.

i relate to them what happened


message 438: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby By now I have finished my fairy nonsense, I am out of shock and my only emotion is now annoyance. "Really you two? Come on! And also, WHAT IS GOING ON? And what did I miss?" I begin munching on a pear.


message 439: by [deleted user] (new)

i smack the paer from rubys hand. "No eating.!!!" i scold. c'mon. i drag her towards the corner of the path and sit her down...

ok who or what is the most important thing to you.


message 440: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby I stare woefully at the half-eaten pear, but turn around when Zaynah asks me that. "Ummmm.... well, I, uh guess my cat, Coconut... Or my other cat Gingersnap... Or... Wait, why does it matter?"


message 441: by [deleted user] (new)

Because if we do t hurry both ginger snap and coconut could be dead. And my mother or my boyfriend could be dead.


message 442: by [deleted user] (new)

(( friend who is a boy best friend whose a boy. Not boyfriend. A boy friend))


message 443: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby (got it)
"But, but why? Who...Wait a second, it's my mom, isn't it?"


message 444: by Maj (new) - rated it 3 stars

Maj I look at Ruby. "Your mom? I thought you were undetermined, like Kmae." I start looking to Zaynah. "And what are they going to Katharina? Who are they?"


message 445: by Ruby (new) - rated it 5 stars

Ruby "Yeah...my...mom... she... she's Hecate, goddess of magic and crossroads. My brother is the crossroads, I'm magic. I'm sorry I lied... I had to, ya see..." I stared down at the dirt, my toe making circles in the sandy floor.


message 446: by [deleted user] (new)

"She was contacting her through the fruit she is always eating. Her mother forced her to do it. Hecate sees me as "a threat". I have no idea why. I'm not even claimed! I doubt just because I am a wilderness caller, long story for a later time, a powerful goddess would hunt me down. Anyway, Ruby has stopped and come to help." I explain. "Ooo. Ruby? Your arm. The cut is defiantly infected. I need to take a closer look. May I?" I ask. Her arm was swollen and the cut had a green goo surrounding it.


message 447: by Maj (new) - rated it 3 stars

Maj "Damn, you're the necromancer's kid?" I laugh. "No wonder we got along so well. But what does your mom have to do with the 'threat on our loved ones'?"


message 448: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 09, 2014 02:28PM) (new)

Come...come to the place where it all begun and retirieve what has been lost. Save what has been taken and fix what has been torn. Tell them all for all has been taken from them


that's the voice i heard and i twas obviously talking about us 4. so what do you think is "the place where it all began"


message 449: by [deleted user] (new)

i think the gods are angry.

and for the first time theyre working together to get revenge on us. it doesn't make sense.


maybe...maybe its a test


message 450: by [deleted user] (last edited Jul 09, 2014 02:32PM) (new)

"Ooo!! Tests! Lets do this!!" I say enthusiastically. Question 1: Where is the place it all began? Well... where did we bond the most? Where did our friendship start?" I ask. They all just stare at me with confused eyes. I smack my hand into my fore head and sigh. "Tartarus? Ding ding ding!" I say sarcastically.


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