Reigining review request

[Joseph]

I Was hoping to get some reviews for my latest work, "Reigning."
It is my first science fiction work.
Before this latest piece I wrote a paranormal young adult book about a teenage girl whose drawings seem to be answering questions asked to loved ones who have passed away. I also wrote a middle grade school campfire chapter book, and a dark comedic play about a guy who writes a campfire chapter book.
I am a big fan of Sci F, just never had the story to write, that was, until I met Jilly. Jilly is my cousins dog, and he could really use the Dog Whisperer or a slide ruler. She is a bit of an odd dog who creates crazy designs with her food. I found another dog on youtube who makes even crazier shapes and actions with her dog toys; reasoning would lead you to the conclusion that the dogs are performing some form of territorial marking, "Reigning takes another tact in an attempt to explain the phenomena. I am hoping to make the story into a series and really have some unique plot lines planned. That said, " Reiging" itself is more an adventure book introducing you to some of the characters.
I would gladly send a few Kindle gift copies in exchange for honest reviews, and or feedback. I also would love to share with the readers ideas that I was planning to do with the next books.

Thanks for any consideration, and please leave your name here or email me.
Joe

[Chrys]

Could I kindly suggest that you clean up the typos and grammar in this posting? It makes me fear that your book is full of similar errors, which puts me off reading it.

[J.A.]

It sounds really intetestimg Joe. perhaps you could post a blurb? You've cunningly given very little away ;) There's a blurb feedback thread if you want to tighten that up btw. Good to hear more about your writing process. I think you'll attract more reviewers if you give us a clear, snappy description of the book though :)