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Marifer Santos | 3 comments HELLO! I AM AN ASPIRING WRITER, AND I WOULD LIKE FOR SOMEONE TO HELP ME BY READING MY STORY AND GIVING ME AN HONEST CRITIQUE ABOUT IT. I DO NOT MIND IF THAT PERSON WRITES HONESTLY ABOUT IT, EVEN IF THE COMMENTS HURT. I WANT TO IMPROVE IN EVERY POSSIBLE WAY I CAN!

HERE IS THE LINK TO A STORY OF MINE. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR TIME!!!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/4606941...

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Christina Walker does not know how to react when Theodore Harper arrives at her house. She is both angry and curious. On the one hand, Christina is furious that her mom did not let her know that a stranger was going to live with them for the next six months, especially because he is staying at her room. On the other hand, Christina is very curious to learn more about this boy's past. There is a constant pain in Theodore's eyes that Christina cannot ignore, and there is more to this green-haired teenager than meets the eye. He also happens to have a strange obsession with collecting wires, which captures Christina's attention even more. Will Christina let her walls down, or is she too scared to be hurt once again? Is it true that some people can actually change our lives for the better? Read to find out!

https://www.wattpad.com/story/4606941...


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