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message 251: by Perla (new)

Perla I finshed lock and key a like in the morning here's my sarah dessen fav list in order
the truth about forever
lock and key
this lullaby
I'm waiting on just listen now


message 252: by Cleveland (new)

Cleveland call me crazy and be done with it. wrote: "aloha"

Hi I'm new to this group but I have a suggestion.

Consider if somebody wants a read of their story,etc then they post . All they need to add what they need: a general review, looking for mistakes, that sort of thing.Post say 500 words at a time with a link o the story on GR.Those openings to a story are crititical to 'hook' the reader,

Everybody then reads and reviews.

( In the title of the story can be the Genre in brackets). No two stories are posted in the same post.
To the reviewer it is helpful for other writers to have at least one area where the work might be corrected and with benefits.
Check my profile. I review for two main line authors and get asked to review all the time. I write also.

Now I'm also looking for a young audience to stab at my latest fantasy story.The characters are 10 to 11 year olds.To have all the reviews in one place can only help the writer. With any luck others wanting to have their work reviewed might join and it's good to have a structure.
There is a rule in general : if it is difficult to review a work for whatever reason then ask a question and that will help the writer. With luck he'll reciprocate. It is OK to ask for a favour if you've reviewed another's work.
And I always aim to be published. Do you too? Have a read and discuss. Will it work? I think so .
Cleveland W. Gibson




message 253: by Musical♥Writer (new)

Musical♥Writer (musicalwriter) | 75 comments I'amber. wrote: "Anyone red fade?
LOVE IT!"


Second book to Wake???


Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) hello everyone!


message 255: by [deleted user] (new)

Hey Rubiyah!


Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) hi mary!!!!!!


message 257: by [deleted user] (new)

LOL....:]]]]..


message 259: by [deleted user] (new)

Oh........I'am lost!!!


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
Wuz up?


message 261: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol...He Ash!!YOU'RE ONLINE!!lol!!Nothing.....I'am lost though!


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
Hahahaha......(I hav no idea wat ur talking about) lol



Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) add mee!!!!! im boreeedd!!!!!lolzz!


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
You guys should join this group I made a few days ago. It's called the unknown writers rp .


Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) ok.. ill try!


message 266: by Musical♥Writer (new)

Musical♥Writer (musicalwriter) | 75 comments call me crazy and be done with it. wrote: "ok, so I just did somthin a little scary for me. I'm so used to goodreads and all. anyway, thers this site called Young Writers Socity. heres the link:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/

bas..."


Arg!!!! I Can't figure out how to do anything on there!!!! Its so agrivating!!!




message 267: by [deleted user] (new)

Hhahah...WHAT are we talking about??


message 268: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 188 comments Mod
Helllo everyone, I'm back ;D


message 269: by Perla (new)

Perla hello


message 270: by [deleted user] (new)

hey!!!YAYYY


message 271: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 188 comments Mod
Ha, what's up?


message 272: by Perla (new)

Perla me nothing


Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) so.... im still trying to stay active..


message 274: by I'amber (new)

I'amber (xiamberx) | 188 comments Mod
;p


message 275: by [deleted user] (new)

lol!!!!!!!


Ruby~am I a part of the cure? (openupyoureyes) what?!!!!! ahahahahahahaha!


message 277: by [deleted user] (new)

Rubiyah, read some of the writing!!!lol


message 278: by coeli (new)

coeli (goodreadscomboogaloo) i luv all the pics u guys r posting!


message 279: by Perla (new)

Perla kool


message 280: by Sage (new)

Sage (theoriginal) Music is my passion, if you ned help on posting things ask me and i can help out a bit. what is your user name?


message 281: by Perla (new)

Perla u talking to me?


message 282: by Sage (new)

Sage (theoriginal) i'm talking to 'Music is my passion'.


message 283: by [deleted user] (new)

she is talking about Bianca


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
Hi again. I want some cottan candy flavored poptarts.


Look. this is my sign→ @};-
It's a black roze.


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
I know.


message 287: by Perla (new)

Perla bored


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
I LOVE ANIME!!!!!


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
If anyone asks what that is,.... I will hurt them.

Just a freindly warning! :]


message 290: by Perla (new)

Perla what's anime


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
Stay calm ashley, she didn't mean it. XP


message 292: by Perla (new)

Perla i did mean it i don't get anime


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
i know. Anime is like cartoons, except they're Japanese and usually start out as manga, whitch is a comic book but better. My picture is manga/anime


message 294: by Perla (new)

Perla oh kk btw i know what a manga is


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
That's good.


message 296: by Lena (new)

Lena (lenalee11) http://www.goodreads.com/group/show/2... Plz join and tell them i invited you, even if you dont like it, u dont have 2 be active, or have eggs, just go 2 the introduceyourself topic and say "Hi im ___ and Lenalee invited me" Thx!!!!!!!!!!!


message 297: by [deleted user] (new)

Can someone please read some of my writings and comment on them?


message 298: by [deleted user] (new)

Wait a moment I just noticed that Krista is the mod, has Crazy left the group??


message 299: by Sage (new)

Sage (theoriginal) is anyone actually reading the stories in the topics or is everyone just posting them here and asking for them to be read?


BlakRoze*AnimeGirl (blackroze) | 39 comments Mod
I'm not sure...................


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