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Lara and pyscho
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Cheri: The girl who is back to her old self finally
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May 15, 2014 03:10PM
"Yeah but what the heck can I spend the night here?"
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Jake smiled, chuckling softly. "Of course, if you wish. I have a spare room. Why, may I ask?"
"My parents are out of town and I don't like being home alone"
Jake nodded and smiled. "Of course you can stay here."
((Can you help me be more descriptive?))
((Sure. :) Do you want me to start adding more description to my posts?))
((Yeah that would be more helpful Sorry I'm not typing much I'm crying my eyes out))
((Yeah it's just my stupid mom))
((She called me a worthless b*tch))
(( 0.0 That's horrible! That's really awful! I can't even imagine. Don't even listen to her, cause you're not! People only bring others down when they're feeling bad themselves, so just brush it off and move on, trust me, her words don't define you. You're you, regardless of what crap she says. <3))
((Thanks))
((What can I do to be more descriptive?))
((just try to write down everything that happens. If Your character is wearing something, write down what it looks like. If she thinks of something, tell me that. If she smells something, let me know. If she notices a particular decoration in his house, describe what she sees. Describe what she hears, how she reacts to what happens. Hope this helped... Here... this is a sentence:
The dog ran.
And here is the same sentence with descriptions:
The Golden Retriever bounded through the perfectly cut lawn, it's long yellow golden fur streaming out behind it, a red tongue lolling out the side of its mouth.
Hope this makes sense? Just try to add details))
((Kk))
((Wanna do a time skip?))
((Idc))
((Sure))
Jake pulled up to the school, parking his truck before pulling the keys out of the ignition. He undid his seat belt and opened the door, looking over at her. "You ready?" He asked, smiling softly. It was her first day in a new school after all.
She nodded with fear. She hated started a new school and not knowing anybody. She was always one who was unpopular. "I'm not but I guess I have to be" she said as she un did her seat belt and got out
Jake nodded and sighed. He could understand what she must be feeling. He had switched schools for grade six. He slid out and shut the door, locking it. He walked around the front over to her and smiled encouragingly. "It'll be great I'm sure." he promised her.
"But I should be used to this" she said walking with him she had moved more times then she could remember
Jake raised an eyebrow. "You've done this before?" He asked, walking with her up on campus. They slowly neared the doors of the school, passing by other kids.
"Yeah I've moved more times than I can remember" she said following him in
"Rough." He said softly. "I moved once, and that was awful." Then he looked around. "Do you know where your locker is?" He asked. Usually they had the locker numbers written somewhere on the student sheets, but did she even have one of those?
"No I don't" she said saying the truth
Jake nodded and sighed. "Ok. We'll just have to find you an empty one then. Let's go look around my locker." He offered, pulling out his own sheet to find his locker. "Ah, got it. This way." He beckoned to her and started off through the hallways.
"I don't know" she said scared of seeing the person who never mind she thought don't say that ((Sorry about not replying I am sick and almost ended in the hospital))
"Come on!" He encouraged her. "Do you want one near mine? Or not?" He asked her. ((No problem. Are you ok now?))
"I don't care" she said trying to hide her fear. But it didn't work ((I guess))
Jake stopped then, looking at her in worry. "Are you ok?" He asked softly. ((what's wrong?))
She shook her head to afraid to say anything. How can I tell him ((I'm in so much pain))
Jake pulled her to the side gently where they were alone. "What is wrong?" He asked gently. ((oh no! They haven't given you anything for it??))
"I can't tell you" she said softly. "I'm afraid he's gonna come back"((They have but it's my head and stomach now))
Jake looked really worried now. "Who? Who's going to come back?"((That sucks))
"I'm sorry I can't so this" she said running into the parking lot. She was afraid he would leave her too((Yeah it does))
Jake immediately ran after her. "Wait!" He shouted, slowly catching up. When he caught up to her, he held her shoulders gently. "Don't leave. Please. Please tell me what is wrong."((I'll pray for you, if that would make you feel better. And no lol, I'm not just some religious freak. I'm a teen too. :) ))
"I'm scared I'm scared he's gonna hurt me again please don't let him' he said ((Thanks))
Jake grit his teeth. Someone had hurt her? "Who hurt you? Who was it?" He asked her softly. ((np :) ))
"He's coming he said he would I'm scared and I don't want to be here" She said hugging him (( =) ))
Jake frowned. "I'm not going to let anyone hurt you. I promise. Please tell me who hurt you, and what happened, so that I know what I am dealing with." He asked her gently.
She stopped crying and said "my ex he said he would find where ever I moved and I don't want him to rape me again"
Jake tensed. "He raped you?" He asked softly.
She nodded scared he was going to leave just like the others. She started crying again
He hugged her against him. "That's not going to happen again, I promise."
