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message 1: by Samuel (last edited Jan 04, 2016 07:05PM) (new)

Samuel (sajcripp) “Does this vile fog ever lift?”
“The fog . . .” The question seemed to catch Kate off-guard.
“Yeah. I’ve seen the sun twice since I moved here.”
“Hmm. To be honest, I’ve hardly noticed it. Guess I got used to it pretty quick.” She took another large mouthful from her recently refilled wineglass. “You’ll get used to it too, soon. Might even--,” Another belch. “S’cuze me. Might even miss it when it’s gone.”
“I don’t think I could ever get used to this weather.”


Finished this piece yesterday. Quick question: From this excerpt, would you be interested in reading?





Just finished the story!


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