Constructive Critisim :)

[Della]

Just a place where people can post their stories if they want construtive crisitsm or to just be read.
Thx! :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

[Della]

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

a romance story inspired by This Lullaby by Sarah Dessen. enjoy! :)

[Rita]

This is the prologue of my completed Bad-@$$ young adult novel. I hope you like it.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/4...

[[deleted user]]

This is what I am currently working on and is (definitely) not finished yet. Please comment with critism (I fuel on this stuff, no lie) and tell me what you think! :)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

[[deleted user]]

Also, another (totally) not finished piece. Very primitive and in need of critism!

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...