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I might just give it a go. I've been itching to start writing again. Just need to make time.
Cαiтℓуn ~When did the sky turn black + when will the light come back?~ ..Like floating vanishing heads?."wtf? ... you mean like those creepy heads in that little ceasar's Pizza commercial?
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Awesome. That I'd read.
Your other thingy wasn't awful.
I just couldn't read it.
It would get me mad.
But a serial killer story is doable.
I'm not a serial killer. Promise.
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wtf? ... you mean like those creepy heads in that little ceasar's Pizza commercial?"
No like those moments when you get the feeling someone is watching you and so you look and see a face for a split second before it disappears.
My writing makes you mad? AWESOME! WIN! I always try to provoke an emotion from the reader...wait which thingy? I've got a lot of stuff posted. I'm gonna assume you mean the Journal. You'd porb like my other stuff better
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Cαiтℓуn ~When did the sky turn black + when will the light come back?~ wrote: "No like those moments when you get the feeling someone is watching you and so you look and see a face for a split second before it disappears.
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ah, yeah totally get that. *backs away slowly*
nah but seriously yeah I've seen things out of the corner of my eye and have wondered did I really see what I think I saw but when you turn there's nothing there. & I was not under the influence of anything. ..that I know of
Cαiтℓуn ~When did the sky turn black + when will the light come back?~ wrote: "Yea the journal. Never tried the other stuff."Other stuff -
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...?
chapter=2
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
https://www.goodreads.com/story/show/...
if you're bored sometime.
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Okay I'll see if those don't make me mad sometime.
Like an oompa loompa? You're being haunted by an oompa loompa. gtk. They might be more to your liking...maybe idk. Let me know.
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Maybe. I'll see maybe tomorrow or the day after.
Perhaps he was stretched by one of Wonka's inventions so instead of short and stout he's now tall and skinny?..idk I'm just speculating. K that's a never. - But if you do, Don't read the one titled Chapter 3: The psychologist - clowning around though.
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Wait so read it or don't and why?
Don't read that particular chapter, it'll prob tick you off. lol Besides it gets a bit crude towards the end.
Cait - I think you should change your tag line to "the girl haunted by a skinny oompa loompa"
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XD I'll do it just for today.
I'm Dying laughing! and yes I have to admit that is prob me,spot on. Cass just showed me some text that went viral when the dad was left in charge of the kid.
Imma goat (Greatest of all time) jk I'd be the opposite.
Going through some old writing I came across this. Not quite a serial killer but apparently the idea has always appealed to me....Crime Prompt timed-25 minutes (original entry June 2013 - Writing on the wall prompt)
Criminal Minds
I normally pick my targets carefully. The ones who pay little to no mind at all to their surroundings are prime. Their eyes always glued to their beloved cell phones in hand, checking the latest facebook status updates. Occasionally they give a halfhearted upwards glance just for the appearance of simulating caution. They’re under the false illusion that walking at a brisk pace will keep them safe. Fools they are, the lot of them.
Today, I’m in a rather dodgy mood, I want more of a challenge. I want to take more than just their precious money and idolized material goods. I want to take their sense of security, their dignity. I want to see the terror and panic in their eyes as they fear for their lives.
Relax, I don’t really plan on harming them, though they won’t be privy to my intentions. I’ll send a message to society. They should thank me for being so considerate of their well being and reminding them of the things they ought to value more than the costly gadgets they carry. The air they breathe, the time they’ve lost , the sights unseen and the words unspoken. Yes, they ought to thank me, dontchaya think?...What do you know? You’re one of them.
I lean against the wall and scan the crowd, the hustle and bustle of all those in milling about. My prey. They pass me by as if I am invisible. I mean nothing to them; I am nothing more than a spec on the bottom of their shoe. Today however will be a memorable experience for one of them. They’ll not soon forget me. I can feel the evil sneer slide across my face in spite of myself. I quickly bow my head and wipe the grin from my mug before looking back up to continue my observations. I don’t wish to draw attention to myself.
A woman walks by, her high heeled stilettos’ clicking away on the pavement with each dainty step she takes. She has one of those miniature pooches in her oversized purse, its head sticking out, ears perked up and yapping away at everything in sight. She’d be an easy target, too easy in fact.
A gruesome image flashes in my mind. I see myself snapping the neck of the that yappy little pup and grinning with satisfaction as its head flops to the side. The girl screams in horror and that quickly the image is gone. A sharp, searing pain rips across my forehead, taking my breath away and I lean heavily into the wall for support. The pain only last a few seconds, though it is enough to leave me breathless and unsteady.....TIME UP
Nate Farren June 2013
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Heels could be lethal weapon. Parking garages = Agreed. in general they're a murder waiting to happen.give me a few weeks. I'll see if I can try to summons the character of a serial killer and write something from that pov. I like the dark stuff.
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Oh is that what they're called?
I was thinking more along the lines of the heel being used to take out an eye and if plunged in deep enough it should pierce the frontal lobe causing significant brain trauma resulting in death.
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Brutal. Hope I don't come across the likes of you while in a parking garage.
Trying to think of a cool serial killer name.
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sel wrote: "..."Mawhahaha
it's for a character, for a story.
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Not sure I like this title though. It was just something random that came to mind. It'll prob change again.
"If you can't figure out your purpose, figure out your passion, for your passion will lead you right into your purpose." T. D. Jakes (I have no idea who that is..)
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We are all just a spec in this world. Nothing more than an itty bitty dot. look at us being all uplifting and inspiring.
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I'm an optimistic pessimist, I always expect the worst, if it doesn't happen I'm not disappointed.
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Mawhahaha
it's for a character, for a story."
Yeah, I saw that lol
To the optimist, pessimist and realist, while you guys were all arguing whether the glass was half full or empty, I dumped it out and refilled it with vodka. Cheers!
Seth Warren Christian Guyst
_______ Ripley
Brett __________
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That awkward moment when you forget that you changed the title of your journal and don't remember to what and spend 10 minutes looking for it. smh I'm such an idiot.
Found the pen I thought was gone forever.
Life has become quite stagnant. Time to kick things up a notch...or two.
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Like floating vanishing heads?