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Character Workshop: Trainers > Marcus "Marc" Daniel Thorne; Candor

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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

I know you don't want WIP but I had him done and then he got completely deleted so he'll be coming soon


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

I don't think your character ever got deleted. Dauntless male, right?


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

No candor male
He was done up to his pet and when I went to find an image the entire thing got deleted


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Huh. I don't recall it being started, but I'M SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah :( so I'm going to try to redo him but I have family plans most of the day so it might not be for a while


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

I'M SUCH A BAD PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M SOWY ALWY.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

No you're not!!!!! I'll get him done ASAP


message 8: by [deleted user] (last edited Apr 14, 2014 04:21PM) (new)

Name: Marcus "Marc" Daniel Thorne
Gender: male
Age: 21
Birthday: April 10th
Faction they Instruct: candor

Appearance:
Written Description:
Hair Color: brown
Eye Color: hazel
Skin Tone: tan
Body Shape: muscular but slim
Height: 6 feet
Weight: 170 lbs.
Pitch of voice: masculine and serious
Other: Marcus is very fit but is also lean, not buff. He wears glasses a lot. He usually wears a black casual blazer and white jeans.

Personality: Marc is always willing to tell the truth. Although he is kind he is unwilling to lie to spare the feelings of others. He is smart. He loves seeking the truth about everything. He is also very welcoming to new initiates, although he is still brutally honest. He loves his family even though he believes they are wrong in their oblivious kindness even to the point of lying. He will do anything in his power to spread the truth to his fellow members of society.

History: Marcus was born into the faction of Amity. His parents, Cheryl and Evan Thorne, would always teach him to be kind to everyone. Marc, unlike his brother and sister, never understood the point of lying just to be kind. He started saying whatever he thought to be true. He would call his sister a wuss and his brother an idiot. Then when the day came for his aptitude test, he found out he was more suited for candor. At his choosing ceremony he disappointed his parents by becoming a candor transfer. He finished first in initiation and chose to be a trainer for new initiates.

Family:
Mother: Cheryl, 50, amity. cheryl is very kind to everyone especially her children.
Father: evan, 52, amity. Evan is kind but also stern., especially to his children.
Older Sister: Brenda, 23, abnegation. Brenda is extremely kind, loving, and selfless.
Older Brother: Quin, 25, Amity. Quin is kind to anyone he meets, he cans ettle any dispute with calming words.
Younger Sister: NA
Younger Brother: NA

Divergent: Yes. Erudite and candor

Other: Marc seeks knowledge to be informed about the truth.

Pet:
Name: lucky
Gender: male
Age: 2
Species: lizard
Appearance: Place an embedded picture here. Use this format;
Description: half his body is brown, the tail however is blue. he is about 4 inches long with four legs.
Other: he loves climbing peoples arms.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

Yay! Just delete my little blurb by Family: and you should be good to go!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Oops I will


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

APPROVED.


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