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onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She smiled at him.


message 402: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Nice to meet you" God smiled
"why did you bring here to here?" Devil asked "she don't belong here"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Nice to meet you too." She whispered.


message 404: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "because I wanted, brother" Revil sighed "anyway, dad, could she join us in the... you know"
"only if she won't bother us" God said "you won't do that girl, do you?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "I have no clue what your talking about. Joining you for what?" She asked confused.


message 406: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "to the judgement, of course!" Devil laughed "we decide what to do with the stupid people who die"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Most people aren't stupid. Most people act stupid. Acting and being is two different things."


message 408: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "pfff, whatever" Devil smirked "at least we can hurt them after they're dead"
"oh, stop it already, Devil" Revil rolled his eyes
"sit in your place, Revil, we're about to start"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She shut her mouth. She stood and watch.


message 410: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "come stand beside me" Revil smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded her ahead and went to stand by him.


message 412: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "lets begin! enter the first person!" God said. A young man came inside through one of the doors


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked at them.


message 414: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments Several ducument appeared on a table, and the three of them started to read in them. after a few minutes, God said "heaven" and the man walked through the white portal


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She didn't say anything.


message 416: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "next!" an onld woman came inside, and once again ducuments apeared "you can help if you want" whispered Revil


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She watch the old woman


message 418: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "here, you can look at the documents" he said and read what's written in them


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She didn't say anything. She forgot to tell him about a few more of her powers.


message 420: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "um hello? you there?" he poked her


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Oh yeah." She said looking at him. She didn't like what he said about the old lady. It scared her. She saw the events flash through her.


message 422: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "well? do you have a choice? I remind you the options are Heaven, Hell, reborn, turn into a ghost or completly destroy"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Completely destroy the things she did shouldn't of gotten away with it." She whispered.


message 424: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He nodded "you're not the only one who think so" he pointed at Devil "destroy it is" God said. The woman shouted in pain without voice, and she disappeared


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She didn't want no more of those. Seeing what they did as visions was awful.


message 426: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "next!" a baby walked inside on six "reborn, surly reborn" god said "there's nothing to talk about with him" the baby exited through a door


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She saw them all. She didn't realize she was shaking from that vision.


message 428: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "next!" an old man came inside, and once again the documents appeared "that's very interesting..." Revil whispered to her "he's something between heaven and hell... what do you think?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked at the man and saw what she was doing. She shaked a little bit,


message 430: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "yes, I know we have to make some big decisions sometimes, but it's a part of our job"
"how about the punishment fields?" Devil suggested
"oh, yeah, we can send him to there" Revil said "It's a place with endless fields only with hard ground and some burned-out trees" he whispered to her "it's really an in-between of heaven and hell"
"to the fields!" God ordered, and the man walked away


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded her head. She didn't want anymore visions. She wanted to go back home.


message 432: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "That's it for today" God said


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She smiled a bit.


message 434: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Let's go" Revil said "time to go"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded her head.


message 436: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He held her hands, and teleported back


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She was glad to be back.


message 438: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Well? What do you think?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked at him. "It was ok."


message 440: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "That's it? Ok?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Yeah."


message 442: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He looked disappointed


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "I'm sorry." She whispered."I just can't take that."


message 444: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "It's-it's ok"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "You don't understand why."


message 446: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Really?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Yeah." She looked at him. "I saw the visions of what they did. The screams of the old ladies victims." She said.


message 448: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "As I told you before, not everyone can stand judge the others"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded her head.


message 450: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Anyway, I would like to meet someone else from your family"


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