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message 1151: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He shoot up in his bed "time for school?" He asked, then he realized "time for YOU for school. But I'll go with you anyway. I would like to see the people you compared me to"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked at him. She walked out to the streets."I would love to compare you more because you both make my life horrible." She shouted. "Now I'm not me and you don't seem to care no one does." She didn't have her necklace on which was something she never took off.


message 1153: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He looked at her with sad eyes "I am care about you. I really am! But it seems that no matter what's I'm doing, it's bad. Even if I ask you directly what will be good, you won't answer me! So what do you want me to do?!"


message 1154: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Jun 15, 2014 02:03PM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked down some more. he care about her. She took a deep breath. She didn't answer him. "I'm a nobody with nothing now you know why because my powers made me special."

((GTG i'll be back on later))


message 1155: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments ((Alright))

"No, you're not nothing" he lifted her chin up so her eyes met his "you're special even without the powers. To me you are"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments ((Back and will be on for the rest of the night))

She looked at him. Trying to stay mad at him but she wasn't doing well. "I know your being very sweet and romantic right now but I like it and all but I don't feel special." She was weak and human. "I'm not me. I can't even see through the mist." She said.


message 1157: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "You can't? I thought your father only meant to your goddess powers, not demigod powers" he sighed


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "When he means strip he meant to strip me from everything I am." She said. "Everything is gone." She paused."We should go we can't be late." She said.


message 1159: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Yeah. Late" he sighed "maybe if you'll be a normal human for a few days it'll help"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded her head some. She walked away quickly with her head down. Help? If anything it will make things worse. "Why do you even care you did this to me?" She whispered. She walked in the school.

"Is the freak going out for swim this year? Bragging how you can beat everyone?" Said someone everyone was laughing.

"No. It was a mistake." She whispered. "I can't swim nor can I beat you guys."


message 1161: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "And that's why I'm here" he winked "they can't see or hear me, but I can" he walked to the guy who said that and slipped his legs forward. He fell down on his back.


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Just stop and go away your making things worse."Tears fell down her eyes. She was talking to herself.

"Does the freak talk to herself now?" They asked.


message 1163: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "No" he said "she talked to me" they didn't see him, but hear him


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments Tears were in her eyes. He wasn't helping at all. Everyone was laughing at her. She looked at him and ran out of the place.


message 1165: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Ok, that's enough!" He shouted "stop laugh at her! How will you feel if someone would laugh at you?" He made their pants disappeared


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments He's making things worse in her eyes. She walked slowly back to her house. she felt empty. She was so mad at him for ruining her life


message 1167: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He flew back at her "hey... here, take" he gave her a stack of clothes "their pants. I'm sorry"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "They are going to blame me because I'm the one who has their pants." She said. "sorry isn't good enough you ruined my life even more and good sorry is suppose to help all of it." She shouted.


message 1169: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "I'm going to erase their memory, and give them back good ones about you. any suggestions?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Just stop please everything your trying to make things better or whats for the best." She said. "Oh having her powers stripped is for the best. Maybe it would do you good for being normal for a few days." She said in a mocking tone. "well how would you guys know whats best for me? I made it ten years without anyone helping me." She said and stormed off.


message 1171: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "I'll just erase them" he sighed and did so.


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked down. She had an idea. She ran back to her house and went upstairs to her room taking a knife with her. She couldn't cut herself when she was a goddess because it healed right away now that she was human she could do it and take this empty feeling away.


message 1173: by Alan (last edited Jun 16, 2014 07:20AM) (new)

Alan | 2775 comments Maybe I need to talk to her. Nah, she won't listen to me. what can I do...? he knocked on her door "I figured out that you don't want me anymore, so um, Devil will replace me. You can always call me back if... if you want. Here's a little present for you" he placed a narrow box on the floor and disappeared. Inside it was a sword made of an alloy of Celestial Bronze and Imperial Gold.


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She felt him leave. She took the knife and slowly cut herself. She took a breath and liked the feeling she got. She didn't feel anything when this was happening. She saw the blood trickle down on her arm. She should just kill herself. She liked the idea as it form in her head. She didn't answer him or hear him as she kept cutting. She smiled some as the empty feeling left her.


message 1175: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments Devil appeared in her room "OK, who's ready for some..." he stopped when he noticed her "already dead? I thought it'll take at least a week" he shrugged "am I that terrifying? hehe. Better tell Revil" when he told him, Revil was shocked "but... but..." "don't worry brother, you can always visit her in my territory"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She was so confused on what happened. She was dead. It didn't matter anyways her life was horrible she wasn't herself. Everything she had was gone in her eyes. She was just a human and it didn't matter. She didn't matter. Her visions were wrong she would never marry. She knew she had to face them on judgement day. She was no angle but was she going down there? She just wanted the feeling of her powers and being special back but it didn't come back and will never come back.


message 1177: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "This is all because of me!" Revil cried "How can it even happen? It doesn't make any sense!" Revil went to Mount Olympus "I'm sorry..." Revil said to her father "I failed"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "You haven't failed anyone or me this was suppose to happen and thing will fall into place. the blade she used was curse that only true loves kiss could bring her back so there fore shes dead for now but won't be for long." He said.


message 1179: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "what you're saying is, me or anyone else must fall in love with her?" he raised his eyebrow "how can I even found someone? If I got it right, nobody likes her"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "No what I'm saying all you have to find the guy in the vision." He said showing him the vision. "Weird that this guy in the vision looks like you "and he walked away.


message 1181: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He gulped "I have... to love her?" he said to himself "I have to try!" he teleported to her, but he was invisible


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She was scared. She was going to die. She looked down waiting for her judgement.


message 1183: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "I have to love you..." he whispered "love you... I have to..."


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She didn't hear him. She cut herself off from the real world and everyone around her. She thought for a moment. "He actually did care for me and I pushed him away because that's what I do." She said,


message 1185: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He looked at her sadly "I really tried to help, but you ignored me too much..."


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked down. She wasn't herself without her powers. "I didn't realize I killed myself." She whispered. "I'm sorry. I wasn't myself without my powers." She said.


message 1187: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "It's ok" he whispered "I forgive you. But the only way you could be alive again is that I need to love you, then kiss you"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She didn't hear him because she lost faith in herself and magic. "I wish I could see him before this judgement thing." She whispered.


message 1189: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "I'm here!" he shouted "right here!" he poked her neck


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She felt a shiver on her neck. She stopped caring and believing. She took a breath. she was almost there to her judgement.


message 1191: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments With his finger, he wrote on her back "it's me"


message 1192: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Jun 16, 2014 10:03AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She stepped out of the line and went away so she could cry. "I'm sorry." She said as the tears came down her face. She sighed. "Why did you guys do this to me? YOu left me without my powers." She shouted. She looked down. "I believe ok. I'm sorry everything came down." Her hearing and sight were coming back. SHe could now here the magic world.


message 1193: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "do you see me now?" he asked her softly "It's me. I'm here to save you"


message 1194: by onceuponatimeareview (last edited Jun 16, 2014 10:18AM) (new)

onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked up. "Where did you come from?" She asked. "I didn't mean to kill myself I just wanted to cut myself so I can get that empty void that my powers filled." She whispered. "Save me how?" She asked.


message 1195: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "by that" he smiled and kissed her lips longly


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She smiled and kissed him back. She started fading. She looked around and soon she found herself in her room and took a breath. "Revil?" She whispered.


message 1197: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "I'm right here" he smiled and hugged her


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She smiled back and hugged him. "You saved me." She whispered. "I'm so sorry for being rude and push you away." She said. "That's just what I'm good at. That's all I know how to do."


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments ((gtg be back around 5:00))


message 1200: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He smiled back at her "so we'd better teach you something else, right?"


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