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message 1051: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He smiled "Excellent! you did it greatly! To be honest, most gods and goddesses won't be as nice as you, they will ask for something in return, kill or thinking to kill the heroes or even ignoring them"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "So I was too nice?" She asked


message 1053: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He shook his head "no, no. There's nothing wrong in being nice. just look at me"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "You sure?" She asked. "I dont want to be known aa a softy."


message 1055: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He shrugged "just be what you think is right"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments she nodded her head. "I dont know what is right but i want to be a good person.'


message 1057: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "A good goddess" he added "now lets see if you can turn to your goddess form, shall we?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded her head. " But i cant control anything when im in that state i dont want a repeat of what happened earlier." She took a shaky breath not knowing if it was a best idea to do that. She tucked a lose strand of her hair behind in her ear. "Ok." She whispered. She closed her eyes. She tried reaching for the power. She felt power over take her. She started glow and you could feel the power rise in the atmosphere.


message 1059: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He smiled as she began to grow "excellent!" he called, stepping back "don't worry, I'll take control of something'll go out of control!"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded her head believing everything he was saying. She was still very shaky. She looked up and smiled some. "I did it." She whispered. She felt something dark enter. She instantly stopped and went back to normal. She didnt know where is was coming from but she could sense it. She looked up to see a really cute guy there.

"Hi my name is Sebastian." The dark energy was coming from him but he masked it from her.

She smiled not feeling the energy. "Hi my name is Vanessa"

"Doesn't that mean beautiful." He asked

"Yes it does." She blushed.


message 1061: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He looked at the strange guy "Sebastian, huh?" he smiled "nice name". he could sense that something wasn't right, but couldn't put a finger on it


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Thanks." He said. "Such a beautiful name for a beautiful girl." He whispered.

"Thanks."She whispered.


message 1063: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "such a flirting guy" he whispered in her ear "so, Sebastian, enjoying heaven?" he asked him with a smile


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Whats wrong with that?" She hissed back. She was falling for his act. "Are you visting."

"Well yeah I am im looking for this girl who i was suppose to talk to but she isnt here but your a pretty girl. Maybe sometime who and I could go to this magical party?" He asked.

"Tonight? I would love to." She said.


message 1065: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "I'll come too, just in case. can't leave her alone, I hope you understand"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "No problem." He said. He could easily get her alone.

"I don't need you to be watching me every single moment of the day." She snapped. His energy was effecting her more because she couldn't sense the energy from him and she was new to this.


message 1067: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He sighed "fine. but I'll just be there. I like parties, you know"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded her head slowly.


message 1069: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "when, exactly? and where?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "I'll pick her up at central park." He said.

"Ok." She said giddy.


message 1071: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Sounds good"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She watch him walk away. She felt different. His presence was giving her an evil attitude. "You dont have to come." She snapped.


message 1073: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He looked at her surprised "what happened to Mrs. too-nice?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked at him. "Nothing i dont need a babysitter." she had a sly smiled. "You probably are jealous."


message 1075: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "jealous? about what?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "About me having a hot date and you dont want me to be with anyone but you."She said


message 1077: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He blushed "what? no! I can have a date of my own if I wanted to, but I don't!"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked at him. "Yeah you couldnt get a date if you want to because your not me." She said. She smiled some. "Theres a mugging going right now." She smiled some more. "Perfect."


message 1079: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "something's wrong..." he closed his eyes and focused "you have evil in you! I must clean it!" he placed his hand on her forehead and went into her brain


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Back off from me." She snapped and backed away. "Dont touch me." She said She closed her eyes and dark clouds form in the sky. you could sense the power from her. "I have a party to get ready for."


message 1081: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments Her mind was a mess "oh God..." He whispered "this isn't good"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Whatever." She said and walked to a store. She grabbed a black dress and walked off. "Your letting me take it." She said and walked out. she flashed it on.


message 1083: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He ran around in her brain, trying to fix her evil parts.


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She liked it. She went to the party. She was dressed and ready. "hi Sebastian." She kissed him on the cheek. she could feel more evil in her. She let it control her. Her eyes turned a dark blue.

"My dear how do you feel?" HE said


message 1085: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Oh no!" He yelled as more evil got inside "I fix the evil-but not fast enough! What can I do..." He thought


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She felt like someone wanted her to give the evil away. "I feel amazing. I think we need to destroy." She said.

"Yes your evil." He said."And yes we do. Lets start by taking over Olympus."


message 1087: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He froze "oh, crap!" He worked as hard as he could "I have to warn the gods!" He sent an Iris-message to her father


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments He got the message and didn't start to panic because he knew and so did the others that she was powerful but if she was evil then they had no chance. he sent a message back saying that he hast to stop her.


message 1089: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "yeah, easy to say" he mumbled "I know! I'll call Devil" he closed his eyes, and Devil appeared in front of him "what do you need now, brother? I'm a little busy" Devil said to him. "you see, this girl-the goddess in training-got controlled by an evil power. I know you're the evil lord and all that, but if we won't stop her she'll destroy the Olympus!" Devil chuckled "like in ancient times, eh? alright. you know what to do" they held hands and closed their eyes, focusing on moving the evil away. Slowly, Devil moved it toward him like a magnet. finally, all the evil disappeared.


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She felt really dizzy. Her face was really pale. She felt everything was coming down. She didn't know what would happen. Her eyes widen some and she collapsed. She felt the darkness leave. She still had abnormal amount of power for a goddess.

They cursed some. "guys we will get her back but for now lets go."


message 1091: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Thanks, as always" Rebil smiled, and meanwhile Devil was gone, he went out of he mind "Hey!" He shouted, helping her stand up


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She stood up dizzy. "what happen?" She whispered. She felt weaker. though she still had tons of powers left. Deep down inside she liked the power and that scared her.


message 1093: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Evilness controlled you" he said quietly "but you're safe now"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She loved that feeling. She nodded her head. She would do anything to find the same power feeling again.


message 1095: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Are you ok?" He asked her, worried


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked at him and nodded. She walked off to a club. She didn't know where she was going but she wanted the feeling back. She actually started to believe she was evil.


message 1097: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Ok. Good" he smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She just nodded her head. She walked into the club. She order a drink. She grabbed it. No one asked her age. She didn't care knowing she would get it no matter what.


message 1099: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments He sighed, sitting down on one of the chairs. He hoped she's really ok, like she said.


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She was surprised he didn't say anything about her drinking. She had about a few of them and was drunk that much. she got more drinks guzzling faster. She soon was drunk. She stumbled into him. "Hi." she slurred.


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