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onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "I'm not hiding nothing from you." She said. She looked at him. He was an angel. "So your an angel?" She sighed. "How do I know I can trust you?" She asked.


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Alan | 2775 comments He shook his head "an angel?" He smiled "I'm the one who lead the angels. My name is Revil, son of God, don't ask about the mother, brother of Devil and his complete opposite, and the ruler of heaven"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Still didn't answer my question. How do I know I can trust you?" She said. She couldn't show him herself in her true form yet. She looked at him. "I don't trust you completely. So I'll be leaving here." She said with her blue eyes staring at him.


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Alan | 2775 comments He returned her gaze "wait" he said softly "you're going to meet your father, don't you? He knows me, he'll tell you you can trust me. I'm sure"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "You don't even know who my dad is." She said looking at him. "Tell me if your so smart at these things." She said. "You don't even know my name or anything about me. It's not like your here to protect me and even if you were I wouldn't allowed anyone to protect me because I'm much capable of doing that myself."


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Alan | 2775 comments "I'm sure you do a great work with that, no doubt at all" he said "but don't you think it's just ridiculous that you even need to trust me? But alright, you can just lead me to your father"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "No I will not lead you to my dad." She said. She looked at him. "I have to go." She said walking away. She stops. "Tell me who my dad is then I'll take you to him."


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Alan | 2775 comments "Hmmm...." He looked closely at her "first, there's nothing fair by hiding your aura. Bring it back"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She nodded and brought it back. She looked at him. "Tell me who my dad is now." She whispered.


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Alan | 2775 comments "Not an easy task, not indeed" he whispered and thought "your dad is a god, that is for sure. A god of many gods who together came from a mythology. The most common are the Rome, Greek and Egyptian mythology" he sat down on a bench and thought "I see in your aura... Freeness. Yes, freeness. Something open, something wild... Not so bad, though. Surly not evil. What means-no hell. Nor air, as I see. What means, sky or water. I don't see the powerfullness Lighting usually have... Or the forbidden love to earth, like out friend up their to his love down here. What means... Water. Sea. But, Poseidon or Neptune? That's the hardest thing to decide. They're very alike, but also different. I just have to look more closely in your aura, Greek or Rome... I'll go with Poseidon!"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She said. He got it right. "Sorry my dad is just an regular business guy." She said walking off. She sped to Empire State Buliding. She got there before he could get to it. She teleported to her dad. "Sorry I'm late" she said to her dad.


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Alan | 2775 comments He narrowed his eyes, and slowly walked to the Empire State Building "normal business man, hmm? We'll see about that..." He mumbled and teleported to the highest level, 'the gods level', he used to call it. It was literally a huge different level.


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments She looked at that guy who followed her. She looked down at the floor. She hated him so much. He was so annoying. "Sorry daddy I have to go somewhere." She said.

"Sit right down now." She nodded her head and her dad's commanding voice.


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Alan | 2775 comments He stayed where he was, turned back to his human form, and looked around. He always liked that place, so fancy.


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Come Revil nice to see you again."

Her faced pale. "Daddy can I be dismissed now?"

"No sit down." She nodded.


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Alan | 2775 comments He smiled as he walked to them "nice to see you too, Poseidon" he said "it was a long time since I saw you here"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Yes it has been a long time." He said.
"I really have to get going Daddy."
"No you don't sit down." He paused."my daughter is a little head strong."


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Alan | 2775 comments "So I can see" he said in a soft voice


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Anyways I need your help." He said.


"Daddy no don't do what I know your going to do. I don't need no body."

He rolled his eyes. "I want you to train her protect her and find the her a guy because soon she'll be taking over Olympus."


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Alan | 2775 comments He nodded "I'll try my best, and do as you say, Poseidon" he said "I only worry your daughter doesn't really like that idea..."


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "She'll get over it." He said.


message 72: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Good, the faster the better" he smiled


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Yep." He said.

"Just because of that stupid orca reading. Doesn't mean that will happen." She said.


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Alan | 2775 comments "Will you mind explain again that 'orca thing', Poseidon?" He asked "just want to be sure"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "No I can't explain to you. Because it will not come true." He said.


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Alan | 2775 comments "Oh? Doesn't that what your daughter just said?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "She doesn't believe it will happen. If I told you you would laugh to." He said.


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Alan | 2775 comments "Try me"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Well the orca told her about the guy who she is suppose to marry."


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Alan | 2775 comments "And you say it won't be him?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "I believe it will she didn't know and now that she knows. She surely doesn't believe the orca."


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Alan | 2775 comments "Oh. Well, only the time will tell"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Yeah."

"Daddy dear why don't you tell him who it is."


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Alan | 2775 comments "You can tell me instead, if you so want me to know"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Ok it was you." She said.


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Alan | 2775 comments He held his laugh "me? It says you'll marry me?" He said quietly "well, like I said, only time will tell. Who knows? Maybe I will love you and it'll come true"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Yeah um no sorry happy now." She said.


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Alan | 2775 comments "We'll see" he said "you can choose now"


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Alan | 2775 comments ((*cant))


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "If I want you which I don't. I'll choose whoever I want." She said looking at him.


message 91: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Of course" he smiled "but let's leave it for now"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Yes." She paused. "I'll be on my way daddy." She said walking off. She looked over to him. "Well just go out separate ways when we get out"


message 93: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "I don't think so" he didn't move "I do believe your dad want me to stay with you, don't you, Poseidon?"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Yes I did."

She rolled her eyes.


message 95: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "There must be a way to promise she'll stay with me, and not run away"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "There is away."

"Daddy don't say that way. I'll stay with him anything but that way." She said.


message 97: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "Say it, please, Poseidon"


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "Since her Aunt is Aphrodite a simple kiss will make her do anything you like her to do."

She looked at him. "Your not kissing me."


message 99: by Alan (new)

Alan | 2775 comments "A kiss, you say? I'll remember that" he said "it just make it more like I really will marry you" he smiled "but I'm not my brother" Suddenly, someone came inside the room "speaking of the Devil. Literally" Revil laughed and walked to Devil


onceuponatimeareview | 7246 comments "How did he get here? He can't be here this is for only light magic?" She said.


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